I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :D thank you!!
Very good! ^o^
~ Hannah Abbot
Author's Response: :) :) :)
that was a nice chapter thought il say that this one was not upto the usual standards.
Author's Response: sorry i hope the next one will be better... NEWTs are kind of boring but necessary, i'm afraid. keep reading though!
Aw!
Author's Response: lol :P
That was really good. 8D No mistakes, for what I can see. I can't wait for the next chapter. 8D
Author's Response: WAHAY no mistakes, the next chapter is in the queue.
aww..so cute. but more sappiness please
Author's Response: agreed.
awe, sweet! but sort of boring, but not everyday is exciting, so good job! :D and Remus is back! :D :D good, he would have been freaking if he missed all of his NEWTs. can't wait for the next chapter. :D :P
Author's Response: thank you - it *was* a bit of a boring chapter but NEWTs had to be done sometime ...
Nice chapter.
Except it's Arithmancy, not Arimancy. And I thought in OoTP, Jo said the NEWTs take place at the same time as OWLs. So wouldn't that be in June, not April? Sorry, I don't mean to criticize, I guess I'm just a perfectionist.
Love the story. Keep up the great work! :]
Author's Response: probably did, but this is at least 20 years before OoP, so i was using a bit of artistic licence by assuming that things might have been a bit different back then... thanks for the review, i will submit the next chapter as soon as i get some sleep! :P
Mrs. Potter is a lote like Mrs. Weasley! I love it!
I like how you take random characters and give them a personality. Update soon!
Author's Response: Lol i thought they were a bit too similar! but i love Mrs Wealey and i think James' mother would have been nice like her ... Glad you like it thanks for the lovely review! i have updated, just waiting for acceptance.
AW YAY REMUS WOKE UP :)
awesome job. i love it! :D
Author's Response: aw thanks! I take it you are also a Remus fan? Long live Remus!
awww.. damm cute;P
Author's Response: Lol yay! :D
great chapter! can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: :D i'll update as soon as i have proof-read the next chapter.
lol! i like this chapter a lot, but i have a question. i thought that James' mom )mum) had red hair instead of brown. i don't know if i read this in one of the great HP books, something like all the Potter women had red hair or something. i don't know (IDK) i might have read it on fan fiction and everyone says his mom (mum) had red hair and all that jazz. so, i like this story a lot! nice to know that the healers aren't treating Remus any different because he is a werewolf. :D that's good to know! :D cool story, can't wait for the next chapter! :P
Author's Response: i honestly don't remember reading that but if you are right then i'm sorry! Glad you liked the chapter though. :)
That is very sweet, I like the end alot.
I would love it if you read some of mine. They are ruff around the edges but...yeah. They aren't on mugglenet, so here's the url: http://www.ginnypotter.com/phpnuke/modules.php?name=Fictioneer&file=index&options=SearchResults&searchterm=croshanks&pagenumber=1&searchkind=author&totalpages=-1
Author's Response: I'd love to, thanks for the url. Thanks for the review, keep reading and reviewing!
aww very cute! but i wanna hear more about ellie and sirius, and james and lily. update soon
Author's Response: don't worry, lots more coming up!
xD More.....
'The next morning the three of them got ready to Apparate back London..'
*back to London
'James, Lily and Remus approached the desk of the Reception Area and joined the small queue.'
*James, Lily and Sirius.
Author's Response: aaaaargh sorry! I was trying to get the chapter up quickly. I promise to *properly* proof-read this next one!
Yay! Remus woke up! I am sad that he had to be the one that was in the coma. Remus is my favorite!
Author's Response: He's a sweetheart!
Oh, love the story. xDDDD
Author's Response: Yay! :D
'Lily stood a step closer to Lily just as his parents Disapparated.'
Should be *James stood
Author's Response: Cheers I'll change it now...
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAA! i can't read it now but i will later! yeah! i love this story! :P
Author's Response: Brilliant! Glad you like it!
