This was awesome! Great job!
Author's Response: thank you! :P
Aww! I love it! Exactly what I wanted to read!
Author's Response: great - just what i like to hear! Keep reading!
AAAAAH! He finally did it!!! Whoot!
Author's Response: :) i love James!
YAY! Awww, that was SO romantic! I love it! Keep it up!
Author's Response: yay! so glad you liked it! :)
awww...its sad that they die...but voldemort gets his dues
Author's Response: :( tell me about it...
So cute!!!! I love it!!!!! Update!
Author's Response: yay! will do asap.
Ahh! I hope the next chapter is validated soon!
Author's Response: me too!
plz plz plz finish this story i need to know how it ends plz plz finish it
Author's Response: i promise i will!! :)
perfect dialog between Lily and james! I can feel some life experience from it :D :D No, seriously, very real and believable conversation. Good job!
Author's Response: haha well don't we all have a liitle? Anyway, glad you enjoyed the chapter, i liked this one a lot... :P
LOVED IT!!!! Didn't like the cliffie though (especially since you won't be here for 10 days to update!!!!
I'm obsessed....i usually check everyday for an update, but i'e been at camp for a week.....so i couldn't. :(
UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: lol i will get it updated as soon as i can, i promise! Just got back from holiday so i'm on the case as we speak! (or type ...) Really glad you like it, keep reading!
that was a good chapter.
Author's Response: :D thank you
As in Rons Words
" That Was Bloody Brilliant!"
Wow i love this story so much please update sooon! This is really good! When your first book comes out please tell me!!! IM SOO HOOKED!
- Sophia -
Author's Response: haha i wish! thank you very much i'm glad you like it so much! the next chapter will be up as soon as i can make it ... keep reading!
I love this fic!
Its so well writen.
This was an excellent chapter, but I have loved the whole thing :)!
Can't wait for the next chapter-keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you! (and i love your pename, Dobby is amazing!)
Oh, my! This story is so good! Please update again, very soon!
Author's Response: I'll try! ASAP, promise.
Oh, wow!!! That was BRILLIANT!!! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!
Author's Response: :D :D :D yay! next will be up asap. i just got back from holiday so will be onto it very soon!
Hiya, I found this feed last evening and I spent the better part of today reading through the whole thing! Well, to start you've got me hooked! There is a great sense of story line and plot connection throughout, and the characters are very easy to read and love. Great work. I had a question though? I don't know if you have read DH yet so I won't say too much in case of spoilers but I think if Lily and James are 22 then they would've already had Harry. I think that works out according to JK's time plot (which you might not be following) but I think they had him at 21!
Anyway thanks and keep up the good work I am new to the site and I have really enjoyed reading your work so far! I'll look forward to more! - gwp
Author's Response: well first, thanks for spending the time reading it! I appreciate it and i'm glad you like it... as for the age thing, yes i have read DH but i had written this chapter before and it was too complicated to change it. i hope that doesnt annoy people too much!
Wow. Good one. This was good. I wish you wouldn't have skipped three years, those would have made excellent chapters, but still, this is good. :D
Author's Response: thank you muchly! I wanted to fill in all those gaps but it took me almost 30 chapters just to write one year! i dont think many people would have kept reading lol ...
I loved the part when Dumbledore said, “Ah, so he is. This should be interesting.” I can't actually picture Dumbledore saying this on the arrival of Voldemort, but It made me laugh.
The mushy stuff with James and Lily was great.
Update soon!
Author's Response: hahaha well i suppose at this time Voldemort was really scared of Dumbledore, so Dumbledore isn't particularly flummoxed when he arrives ... well not for himself anyway which is why he creates the bubble around the others ... lol
Loving the bubble :)
Author's Response: LOL thanks
Three years after they left school they would be 20 and have Harry, or Lily would be pregnant if it was right after her birthday. Lily never lived to be 22 years old. Other than a few inconsistent facts, the chapter was pretty good.
Author's Response: well they leave school at the age of 18, and i know i got Lily's birthday wrong but i have to be consistent with my own story, which says her birthday is in september. this means she is about to turn 19 when they leave and so will be 22 three years (and a bit) later. hmm sorry if that makes no sense ... i wrote this before DH so some of the dates are a bit out, sorry!
