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Name: binteridhwan (Signed) · Date: 03/20/07 11:39 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
oooh loadsa fluff!!! yay i like fluff =P n ways good story...write more ...QUICK !!

Author's Response: I will, I promise!

Name: Obsessive (Signed) · Date: 03/19/07 16:59 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
You're right very fluffy! lol. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Oh, it gets fluffier! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: quick_quotes_quill (Signed) · Date: 03/17/07 16:52 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 20:32 · For: Home Sweet Home
this is the cutest fic! i love fluff. a perfect end to my evening.

Author's Response: Awww! Thanks! I'm glad that I helped to end your evening on a good note!

Name: Weasleyboyfreak (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 17:46 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
cute chapter! cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get the next chapter out very very soon!

Name: Dark Dreamer (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 17:36 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
Write more!!! I love it!!!

Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter now!

Name: wonwon_hermy (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 19:55 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
i really like your story i cant wait to read more SOON!!

Author's Response: I am just editing the next chapter so I will submit it soon, don't worry!!!

Name: HPwizzzard (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 19:13 · For: Home Sweet Home
Hem, hem... you can be a good HP fan without shipping canon. You might have offended a lot of people there.

Author's Response: I would like to know how i could have offended anyone unless they are H/Hr shippers... Please let me know so I can fix it if it's really that bad. If you don't like my choice in ships than don't read my story...

Name: green eyed cat (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 17:44 · For: Moving Day at Long Last
awwww, its so cute! I cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love positive feedback! I am working on checking over the next chapter for errors myself and will be submitting it soon so keep your eyes open!

Name: ginnyrocks93 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 21:34 · For: Home Sweet Home
I LOVE fluff!!!! And I LOVE R/H and H/G!!!!! So this is my perfect story.... I'm kind of writing one that's fluffy like this too, but I don't know when I'll post it.... anyways..... I really like your story and I hope to be reading more chapters.... past two I mean, so that means UPDATE!!!!! Well, great job.... 10/10!!!!!!!


Author's Response: thank you soooo much! It means a lot when people tell me how good I did because it gives me the want to write more quicker. Let me know when your story gets posted I'll have to read it. I have a chapter in being betaed now...so the wait won't be too long!

Name: Ginny Potter101 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 11:40 · For: Home Sweet Home
I love your story! I think it is so awesome and unique! Please update it soon. If you want you can read my story, Harry Potter and the Horcruxes. If you read it, please review! Thnx

Author's Response: Thank you...chapter two is in being betaed now. I will have to read that, thank you for the suggestion!

Name: mrs ginevra potter (Signed) · Date: 02/27/07 22:50 · For: Home Sweet Home
keep it coming!

Author's Response: Chapter 2 is being betaed now!

Name: iloveyouhunnay (Signed) · Date: 02/24/07 21:42 · For: Home Sweet Home
cool ood job :)

Author's Response: Thanks you for commenting!

Name: jeweljazz (Signed) · Date: 02/23/07 1:38 · For: Home Sweet Home
cool! when will the next chapter be done?

Author's Response: It's done and I'm going to put it in any day now so keep checking!

Name: sweetdevil (Signed) · Date: 02/22/07 21:31 · For: Home Sweet Home
awwwwww, sweet

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 02/22/07 6:40 · For: Home Sweet Home
That was cute!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: It gets cuter so keep reading and commenting!

Name: Katie Potter (Signed) · Date: 02/21/07 19:05 · For: Home Sweet Home
a lil rushed but still good. try adding a little more depth to the next chapter :) Good story :)

Author's Response: The first couple chapter are meant to be rushed because they are kind of just playing catch up so the actual story can begin...but thanks for your imput!

Name: HJPCATI (Signed) · Date: 02/20/07 20:25 · For: Home Sweet Home
Wow, great start. Update soon! (I love happy endings.)

Author's Response: me too...i just hope the real harry potter ends up with one

Name: Ginny Guerra (Signed) · Date: 02/20/07 20:17 · For: Home Sweet Home
Good! Please update soon! I love fluff, so I think this story will be in my top ten list.

Author's Response: Awww thanks!!!! I just wrote this story less than a week ago so that makes me feel very good...thanks! If you haven't you should read my other fanfiction Ron's New Life...that one is not fluffy but I like it

Name: Darkness Enshrouds (Signed) · Date: 02/20/07 20:04 · For: Home Sweet Home
This is wonderful so far! I did catch a couple little oopses though (nothing major, I promise!).

"I keep forgetting you’re in here, Mate!" Mate shouldn't be capitalized in the middle of sentence like that--it's not someone's name, is it?

"It kind of creepy…" I assume you mean "It's"?

I'd also suggest some sort of break between your A/N and the beginning of your story: it makes it easier to distinguish between the two.

Aside from that, this is wonderful! I look forward to an update.

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy getting complaits because it not only proves that people are human but it makes me better as a writer...I'll look it over better before the next submission!

Author's Response: I thought if a word like Mate was in the place of someones name, it was supposed to be made capitalized...idk though...

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