This story is great so far but it needs finishing.
From the title I expected a bit more wrath from Molly. Maybe even some disapproval? Not much of course, but some.
I am enjoying your story, but I must say the characters seem a bit OC to me. Hermione as an impetuous girl? I have always pegged her as the uber practical type. Not that I think she wouldn't want to marry Ron, but I would think she would spend more time working out her exact rationale. And Ginny asking Harry. Fun, but I would have thought Ginny would be one more to plant the idea and see how long it took Harry to the catch the hint.
Still all-in-all, I am enjoying the whole romp.
If you are willing, I would love it if you could check out my stories (there are only two) and give me your opinion about characterization and circumstance.
Thanks and still reading.
Things are moving right along I see! Well, you did sort of say that they would. Okay, I am prepared to go with the flow... And the fun.
A fun and appropriately nostalgic chapter. Sorry to say it could use a bit of editing for flow, but nothing so distracting as to put me out of the story. Looking forward to the next.
Nice start, I have always been a sucker for H/G, R/H happy stories and this one shows promise.
I LOVE ITa281;a281;a281;a281;a281;you HAVE to make the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
o.O ....again no offence but.... dont read this is you havent seen book 7 or them hp dh movie part one AND two but...lupin and tonks ...DIED great story though
wella292;DONT READ THIS IF YOU HAVENT SEEN THE DEATHLY HALLOWS YET UNLESS YOU WANT IT SPOILED but...hedwig and fred are...dead.otherwise GREAT FAN FICTION!!! I LOVE IT :) write more!
The Chapter was perfect!
I thinkater on in the story you could start with kids later on into R/H and H/Gs marriages. I think if you really became devoted to writing you'd be able to make this a really long story that alot of people would enjoy- in including me(:
Keep Writing! - PLEASE
I wish I could see what the dress really looks like in real life! I sounds so beautiful!!!!!:)
The two proposals in the one day make I REALLY ockward
Aww it's so sweet
Another chapter, please?
I REALLY love this story!! I am a canon shipper to the death! (make note; 1 story exception!) And you gave me and all other canon shippers exactly what we want!! Thank you sooooo much! Please continue this story! Once again i love it!!!
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"It's so FLUFFY!!"
i absolutely love it! cant wait for the next chapter
I love this story! I can't wait until you have another chapter out! I am so excited to see Harry and Ginny get married!