i love it, beautifully written.
You made Draco seem exactly the way he is, not turning him around to be the nicest guy in hogwarts like many others do, i loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I struggled a bit with Draco. I wanted to show that he loved Susan, without making him the lover boy ;) thanks!
Ahh, you almost had me crying... never mind you have me crying!!! that is so sweet and how she had to choose and how hard it was! the whole thing was a emotional roller cooster and i love it!!!
please wriet another like this only much longer and more chapters and more roller cooster-ness!!!
BR
Author's Response: I would love to write another like this :D actually, I'm planning one, but it's made up entirely of OCs. Thanks so much!
i like it. its reelly drepressing at the nd though, but this story makes me want to read other d/s fics. have you thought about writting a sequel?
Author's Response: yes, I have, but I decided against it. I like it better alone, because not all fanfic pairings are supposed to last. ;) I have loads of DM/SB lying around here, so check it out if you're in the mood for some Slythpuff romance
Wow, this is a rare pairing, and you made this one -shot great! I escpecially liked this part:
It was too much for her to hold in. Susan was so afraid of what might happen to them that it was impossible not to do it. She cried. For the first time in several years Susan sobbed, allowed tears to run down her face and buried her face in her hands. Confident arms encircled her and held her close to his chest, which she cried onto. Susan knew that he wanted to comfort her, but he was only taunting her with what she might lose. She wanted so desperately for them to be together forever, but she just couldn’t see it. Susan cried until she could cry no more, and her entire body was empty of tears.
It shows Susan's feelings great. Also, it shows another side of Draco. You sticked to his bad side, but somehow and very lovely I must say, you made him a completely new person; in your story he is gentle, and that is seen in his gentle kisses and actions. Lovely one-shot!
~Sophia
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, this is a rare pairing, and you made this one -shot great! I escpecially liked this part:
It was too much for her to hold in. Susan was so afraid of what might happen to them that it was impossible not to do it. She cried. For the first time in several years Susan sobbed, allowed tears to run down her face and buried her face in her hands. Confident arms encircled her and held her close to his chest, which she cried onto. Susan knew that he wanted to comfort her, but he was only taunting her with what she might lose. She wanted so desperately for them to be together forever, but she just couldn’t see it. Susan cried until she could cry no more, and her entire body was empty of tears.
It shows Susan's feelings great. Also, it shows another side of Draco. You sticked to his bad side, but somehow and very lovely I must say, you made him a completely new person; in your story he is gentle, and that is seen in his gentle kisses and actions. Lovely one-shot!
~Sophia
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, this is a rare pairing, and you made this one -shot great! I escpecially liked this part:
It was too much for her to hold in. Susan was so afraid of what might happen to them that it was impossible not to do it. She cried. For the first time in several years Susan sobbed, allowed tears to run down her face and buried her face in her hands. Confident arms encircled her and held her close to his chest, which she cried onto. Susan knew that he wanted to comfort her, but he was only taunting her with what she might lose. She wanted so desperately for them to be together forever, but she just couldn’t see it. Susan cried until she could cry no more, and her entire body was empty of tears.
It shows Susan's feelings great. Also, it shows another side of Draco. You sticked to his bad side, but somehow and very lovely I must say, you made him a completely new person; in your story he is gentle, and that is seen in his gentle kisses and actions. Lovely one-shot!
~Sophia
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is so nice :D
nice....kind of sad....but oh well...great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was supposed to be sad :D
