This was extremely gripping, especially the part were I thought it was Harry who had died!
omg that was the best fluff ive ever read! :) wright more fluff plz!
That was REALLY good! Fluff and all!
That was REALLY good! Fluff and all!
yes! u did i almost had a heart attack. as though i was reading Deathly Halows for the first time all over again. i nearly had a bloody heart attack. loved it, amazing, i was so caught uo in the moment that i had actuallll believed he was gone, and i almost cried, but then i rememebered harry could never die. lol
This is one of the cutest stories that I have ever read. I love it.
Hi, this is my first review so I'm not quite sure what exactly I am supposed to say >.< . I really love the plot line, it's great to have a little fluff once in a while.
Constructive Criticism : The intro of this paragraph, about half way down the story, "Feeling very warm suddenly," You've split your verb. It should be something more like Suddenly feeling very warm, blah blah blah...
(I hope I er, reviewed correctly, please right me if I'm wrong (: thankies )
Awesome story, and don't worry about all the people bashing you for "being too graphic", it was not at least bit of inappropriate. I'm a fan of graphic details, lol, it makes the story that much more exciting, cause we all wish we were Ginny in that situation, right? lol. Keep on writing!
So sweet! I really liked this story (although I do agree with the wait-until-marriage philosophy) but I am also a sucker for a good snogging scene!
(laughs) Yes, you had us all going there for a moment! Nearly gave me a heart attack, you did! You're good with the fluffy-stuff; write more when you can!
~lil' jaime anne
disgusting. tey shoudl have waited till marriage!! sex is a special thing between a husband and wife!!
Author's Response: Well. You are certainly entitled to your opinions on the subject. I'd like to point out however that your review was neither constructive or helpful, and to use a very worthy phrase (paraphrased of course) If you can't think of something nice to say, keep your big mouth shut.
Finally, I'd like to point out that while you found my story offensive, I found your review offensive. Disgusting, even.
hmph. i think they;re both still virgins, but still! they really should wait 'till marriage!!
*sigh* i gather they had sex before marriage? thats very sad, you know... they should have waited.
that was too physical for me, but i like the necklace.
Wow, this was so beautiful! I'm usually quite uncomfortable reading graphic scenes but you really put so much emotion and heart into it that it was a pleasure to read. I love the necklace that Harry gave Ginny, and the compass, I love seeing what new magical gadgets and spells people come up with. Is it terrible if I feel no regrets about the deats in this fic? With the possible exception of Snape, he's not such a bad old stick, although if he was a true death eater here then stuff him too. Favourites here we come.
sweet :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
“Open it,” she whispered. He looked at her uncertainly and slowly opened the box. His eyebrows disappeared into his hairline again and he looked at her, speechless. He pulled the compass out of the box and held it up by its leather strap. He smiled wistfully.
“It’ll always point you home,” she explained, directing his gaze to the arrow that instead of pointing north, was currently pointing southwest, at her. “So you’ll always come back to me.”
Why am I suddenly reminded of an infamous pirate with a very special compass that points to whatever the bearer of said compass wants, rather than North? That is an interesting idea, 10/10 haha Jack Sparrow aka Harry Potter
Author's Response: Does Jack Sparrow have one of those too? I've only seen the first movie a few times, so if I borrowed that, it was purely coincidental.
That would be a fun crossover to try some time....hmmm.
