Hmmm...very nice. I like it! A review for me, too?
Author's Response: Will do! :) And I'm glad you liked it!
Hello! This is a very nice poem, simple but poingant. I like it, and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Interesting idea…the rhyming isn't forced (for which I give you major points), and it flows relatively well. The fluffiness isn't over done either. I especially liked the verse "Red is the colour of sorrow and sinned". Thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I was afraid the rhyming could end up all over the top.