I'm going to start crying! The emotion, the pain and just the sick feeling in my gut right now is just yuck. This is so amazing! MJ
Author's Response: thanks for the review =] Very much appreciated! -Ashley
This is a very good piece of descriptive story although perhaps it will be even better if it were based on the book and not the movie. :)
I really liked this story!
Author's Response: Thanx! :)
I really like this fic, I think you captured Cho's emotions very well. It's quite sad, but beautiful at the same time.
Just a few things--since you have just one huge paragraph, it's quite difficult to read. I'd recommend that you separate it into different paragraphs.
Also, "Great Hall" should be capitalized. =)
Anyways, nice fic, I enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Thanx! I'll be sure to change thoes things. -Ashley