Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 09/27/07 18:56
Chapter: The Ninth Month

ooooohhhhhhh dun dun dun dun DUN! great chapter but plz make them longer and divide ur paragraphs better.

Author's Response: It's not my fault about the paragraphs. It's just a little glitch. Thanks for the review though!

Reviewer: blondechild
Date: 09/27/07 18:53
Chapter: The Ninth Month

WRITE MORE NOW!!!!

Author's Response: I'M WORKING ON IT!!!

Reviewer: lulovesrupe
Date: 09/23/07 1:36
Chapter: The Ninth Month

ughh i need to see this chapter soo badd!!

Author's Response: Just hold on!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/20/07 15:08
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

aaaahhhhhhh! I can't get into the next chapter!!!! noo!!!

Author's Response: That's because it's not accepted yet! I just put it in queue! Be paitent! Thanks for all the reviews though! can't wait to see what you'll have to say about this chapter....

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/20/07 15:07
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

bedrest. yuck. :P

Author's Response: :P = - )

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/20/07 15:01
Chapter: "How Will I Survive This?"

oh dear, a cliffie. I liked this chapter. I think it was very realistic to have Ginny feel like she would be a burden. Not that she is, but that fits in with her character very well.

Author's Response: Oh, yes. Cliffies are my favorite. Thank you. I find Ginny one of the hardest people to write properly.

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 17:03
Chapter: Already Fighting

that was cute! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 16:58
Chapter: Master Dust Buster

hahaha! :)

Author's Response: Tee-hee-hee

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 16:53
Chapter: " I need a drink..."

Ginny is scary when she's hormonal! But I did love this chapter. :D

Author's Response: Ah... scary to you, fun for me! Thanks!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 16:47
Chapter: Life Must Go On, No Matter What

I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW that the twins would be okay! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Well, I couldn't kill babies! Of course they would be okay! Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 12:37
Chapter: Breaking the News

wow. I think i lost track of the potions at the first mention of red ones, lol.

Author's Response: Alot of people have problems with that..... I thought it was easy to understand.

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 12:33
Chapter: Morning Sickness part II

*sniff*, poor Harry and Ginny! This was an unexpected twist.

Author's Response: I know! *sniff*

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/19/07 12:29
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

I like the beginning! You had me worried with that warning, but i thought it was good.

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, you'll see the reason for the warning. Keep reading!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/16/07 15:44
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

I can't wait to see how Harry handles Ginny in labor. This was a very good chapter. Update soon! :D

Author's Response: Ha, me too. Thanks!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/15/07 14:17
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

good chapter!!! please update soooooonnn!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm-a workin' on it!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 09/11/07 20:35
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

Yay!! you updated, thank you!!! i love this story, it's so intresting and funny, but it has serious parts too. Great story, Update again soon, *~*Sarah*~*

Author's Response: Yeah, I like to balance between serious and funny. I think that's what makes a story. Thanks for reading! I hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: LifeisGood
Date: 09/11/07 19:33
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

Cool. Can't wait for Chapter 10

Author's Response: Thanks! It's in queue as of 9/20/07

Reviewer: Sunflower at Dusk
Date: 09/11/07 18:08
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

Poor Ginny I bet she's going crazy stuck in bed. I would sit there and change the wall color with my wond if i were her. (giggles) I love this story its wonderful

Author's Response: That's something I never thought of...Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 09/11/07 8:29
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

Cool :)

Just fix up the formatting. A new speaker should have a new line, not have everything crammed into one paragraph.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Trust me, I know. From time to time, between my submission and the queue and the posting, it gets a little messed up. I have fixed it though.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/11/07 6:55
Chapter: Overview (months 5-8)

yay! a bit short, but it was awesome! I think Lindsey had better take a look at your dialouge format though...

Author's Response: Thanks! It was just a little transitional chapter, so.

I know about the formatting. I just don't know what happens. Sorry!

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