Great chapter. Sorry I have been out of this story for so long. I don't know why I missed the updates. I can't wait to see what they are having. Take Care
Author's Response: Good to see you again! I should say sorry to for not keeping up with Never Alone. School is just so busy! Thanks for taking time to read this! I really appreciate it. I think you will be pleased with the end! Take care and God bless!
Don't leave us hanging like that!!!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Honestly, i am trying!
HEY!!!
I liked that chapter and all but that was a mean cliffie!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Good, but you really need to fix this formatting. Each new speaker should start on a new line. Also, "breath" should be "Breathe". "Breath" is pronounced "breth", while "breathe" is pronounced "breeth". "You need to breath deep and slow" should be "you need to breathe deep and slow".
Otherwise good work :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Just please remember the formatting is a glitch!
omg that was sooo soo good!!!!!!!!!
can't wait till the next chapter, i hate cliffhangers.
hurry, please
Author's Response: I love cliffhangers.....*hehehe*
I guess its two girls!
Named
Anna=looks like Harry
+
zairah=looks like Ginny
I accidentally lloked at the other I had no idea they connected oops!
Now i spoiled it for myself!
Aww Man!!
Author's Response: Well, be careful what you put in your review so you don't spoil it for others!
good chapter, but the bit about hermione dropping out till her kid was older seems ooc--i dont think hermione would do that...
Author's Response: Well, I will definetly talk to my beta about this. But I don't think it's OOC.
My GOSH!!! Like total cliffhanger...I can't wait to read the end
Author's Response: Thank you!
How dare you!!! Continue ASAP
or else.
=]
~Juli
Author's Response: ; ]
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Luv it.
~Juli
Author's Response: thanks! = P
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~Juli
Author's Response: =)
That was way fun to read. xD Keep at it!
~Juli
Author's Response: Thanks! (Told you it would look up ; ] )
Awww, how sweet, they're not dead. Continuing on.
~Juli
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked!
It seemed too short notice - she finds out she's pregnant, goes to the hospital, she had twins, oh no, one died, and everyone is acting like it's Dumbledore all over again. Kind of unrealistic? Maybe. Still makes a good read.
Author's Response: You may think so...but just wait! This is a very realistic thing; pregnancies can be very unpredictable.
Oh no! Must keep reading - pardon the short review.
~Juli
Author's Response: No probelm! Glad you liked it!
Fast paced, but long enough not to leave me wondering or make me bored. Nice work!
~Juli
Author's Response: That's just how I wanted it; fast paced and crazy! They just found out they are going to be parents, wouldn't you be a little scatter-brained? I would! Thanks!
grrr i need to keep readingg! i love your storyy and the way you writee itt :) the only thing... when a new character starts talking you have to star a new paragraph... it makes it really confusing for the reader this way...
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
That's so funny!!...I had wanted to write a simialr fanfic...but I'm no fanfic author...great job, however!
Author's Response: Aww! Anyone can be an author! You just have to get a great beta and work hard!
It is sooo evil to finish the chappie at such a crucial point. But now I'm sure to check back. I take it the next chapter will be the pnultimate one.=Sammy
Author's Response: Well, *giggle* I can't help it! You won't have to worry about checking back, it may not be up for a few more weeks! Thanks!
omigosh....hurru hurry! write the next chapter quick! this is so wonderful...i'm on the edge of the chair!
Author's Response: yeah..... I have like two paragraphs written. I'm trying to hurry!
