Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 09/28/07 9:55
Chapter: Already Fighting

Great chapter. Sorry I have been out of this story for so long. I don't know why I missed the updates. I can't wait to see what they are having. Take Care

Author's Response: Good to see you again! I should say sorry to for not keeping up with Never Alone. School is just so busy! Thanks for taking time to read this! I really appreciate it. I think you will be pleased with the end! Take care and God bless!

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 09/28/07 9:13
Chapter: The Ninth Month

Don't leave us hanging like that!!!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Honestly, i am trying!

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 09/28/07 7:48
Chapter: The Ninth Month

I liked that chapter and all but that was a mean cliffie!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 09/27/07 23:23
Chapter: The Ninth Month

Good, but you really need to fix this formatting. Each new speaker should start on a new line. Also, "breath" should be "Breathe". "Breath" is pronounced "breth", while "breathe" is pronounced "breeth". "You need to breath deep and slow" should be "you need to breathe deep and slow".

Otherwise good work :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Just please remember the formatting is a glitch!

Reviewer: lunafredtonks123
Date: 09/27/07 21:56
Chapter: The Ninth Month

omg that was sooo soo good!!!!!!!!!
can't wait till the next chapter, i hate cliffhangers.
hurry, please

Author's Response: I love cliffhangers.....*hehehe*

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 09/27/07 21:29
Chapter: Master Dust Buster

I guess its two girls!
Anna=looks like Harry
zairah=looks like Ginny

I accidentally lloked at the other I had no idea they connected oops!
Now i spoiled it for myself!
Aww Man!!

Author's Response: Well, be careful what you put in your review so you don't spoil it for others!

Reviewer: hlf_insn_insmnc
Date: 09/27/07 21:20
Chapter: The Ninth Month

good chapter, but the bit about hermione dropping out till her kid was older seems ooc--i dont think hermione would do that...

Author's Response: Well, I will definetly talk to my beta about this. But I don't think it's OOC.

Reviewer: born2BaRavenclaw
Date: 09/27/07 21:08
Chapter: The Ninth Month

My GOSH!!! Like total cliffhanger...I can't wait to read the end

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:54
Chapter: The Ninth Month

How dare you!!! Continue ASAP
or else.


Author's Response: ; ]

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:43
Chapter: "How Will I Survive This?"

Luv it.


Author's Response: thanks! = P

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:38
Chapter: Master Dust Buster



Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:33
Chapter: " I need a drink..."

That was way fun to read. xD Keep at it!


Author's Response: Thanks! (Told you it would look up ; ] )

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:30
Chapter: Life Must Go On, No Matter What

Awww, how sweet, they're not dead. Continuing on.


Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:29
Chapter: Breaking the News

It seemed too short notice - she finds out she's pregnant, goes to the hospital, she had twins, oh no, one died, and everyone is acting like it's Dumbledore all over again. Kind of unrealistic? Maybe. Still makes a good read.

Author's Response: You may think so...but just wait! This is a very realistic thing; pregnancies can be very unpredictable.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:27
Chapter: Morning Sickness part II

Oh no! Must keep reading - pardon the short review.


Author's Response: No probelm! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 09/27/07 20:25
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Fast paced, but long enough not to leave me wondering or make me bored. Nice work!


Author's Response: That's just how I wanted it; fast paced and crazy! They just found out they are going to be parents, wouldn't you be a little scatter-brained? I would! Thanks!

Reviewer: lulovesrupe
Date: 09/27/07 20:18
Chapter: The Ninth Month

grrr i need to keep readingg! i love your storyy and the way you writee itt :) the only thing... when a new character starts talking you have to star a new paragraph... it makes it really confusing for the reader this way...

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: born2BaRavenclaw
Date: 09/27/07 20:11
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

That's so funny!!...I had wanted to write a simialr fanfic...but I'm no fanfic author...great job, however!

Author's Response: Aww! Anyone can be an author! You just have to get a great beta and work hard!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/27/07 19:35
Chapter: The Ninth Month

It is sooo evil to finish the chappie at such a crucial point. But now I'm sure to check back. I take it the next chapter will be the pnultimate one.=Sammy

Author's Response: Well, *giggle* I can't help it! You won't have to worry about checking back, it may not be up for a few more weeks! Thanks!

Reviewer: Ronsgrl95
Date: 09/27/07 19:02
Chapter: The Ninth Month

omigosh....hurru hurry! write the next chapter quick! this is so wonderful...i'm on the edge of the chair!

Author's Response: yeah..... I have like two paragraphs written. I'm trying to hurry!

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