Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 02/22/07 18:13
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Oh, I really like this story! It sounds like it's off to a great start, and I can't wait for an update. =)
-FenrirG

Author's Response: Thanks! I just got the second chapter back from my beta today, so I hope it will be up soon!

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 02/22/07 16:02
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

this is a really good story and i can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am working with my beta for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 02/22/07 10:14
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

I like your story, you show their angst very well and I cant wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks, that was the very point. The next chapter is coming soon!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 02/22/07 6:58
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Ooo nice start! Cant wait for the noext one!


Author's Response: Thanks! The next one is coming soon!!

Reviewer: Indigoenigma
Date: 02/22/07 0:38
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Love the idea...as I love most H/G fics.
You have an excellent writing style; keep it up and keep your readers happy (that's a good thing to have, by the way, happy readers) with updates really soon! :D

Author's Response: LOL, I love H/G. Thanks, I really appreciate that comment. Happy authors have happy readers! The next chapter is with the beta!! Thanks so so so much!!

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 02/21/07 23:21
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

good so far! Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Thanks, I plan on it!

Reviewer: pumpkin_pie
Date: 02/21/07 23:13
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Great start! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'd type some suggestions, but i got toothpaste all ovet, so I gotta run.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Please come back with those suggestions, (without the toothpaste, LOL) Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 02/21/07 22:46
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Sounds good so far, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: thepatronus_n_thecharm
Date: 02/21/07 21:21
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

Cute, cute. Can't wait til the next chap. comes out!

Author's Response: Thanks, Thanks! The next chapter is with the beta!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/21/07 20:42
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

I like this so far. Maybe a little more dialogue with the I don't know what to do, but the story is lovely. Update soon, please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I do have some trouble with dialouge, but this chapter was more to be rushed and all very exciting. Thanks for reviewing even though you didn't LOVE IT. I have the next chapter with my beta now!!

Reviewer: Dear Irony
Date: 02/21/07 19:12
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

great beginning...looking forward to seeing what the accident is and how harry will handle it. i also think it was cool how you included molly in the chapter. great start!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's not an accident, persay, but still life-changing. I love Molly!

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