Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 06/14/07 13:31
Chapter: Already Fighting

Oh Poor Harry! Every new father to be goes through almost the same thing! He He! Great Job!

Author's Response: LOL!! Thanks!

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 06/14/07 11:19
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

that was cool

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Potter
Date: 06/14/07 9:39
Chapter: Already Fighting

*Squee* that was so cute! Wow. Ginny is really going evil, isn't she? And I like the sound of Ron and Hermione's daughter. Daddie's girl, isn't she? Good chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, she's getting there. I think if Ron and Hermione have a daughter, Ron's definetly the kind of Dad to spoil her. That's what I'm going for anyway!

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 06/14/07 4:06
Chapter: Already Fighting

Fluffier than a million pygmy puffs! (how poetic of me) Can one of the babies PLEASE be a lizard? That would be like the biggest twist ever. At least people would be wondering who the father was...

Anyhoo, I loved this chapter as much as chocolate chip ice cream (wow, I'm dishing out the poetry) bye!

Author's Response: LOL! I like human babies.. sorry! You're a very funny person

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 06/13/07 22:49
Chapter: Already Fighting

Cute & fluffy. The only major flaw is that Harry did learn how to clean while at the Dursley's, so you might want to have the conflicts be about how harry isn't cleaning the way Molly did...

Author's Response: Thanks for that....My beta and I had a talk about it, and decided it's okay. Thanks though!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/13/07 22:16
Chapter: Already Fighting

Update soon, please!

Author's Response: I'll try!!

Reviewer: ginny_fan1506
Date: 06/13/07 19:24
Chapter: Already Fighting

this story is great!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: slytherin_girl101
Date: 06/13/07 18:24
Chapter: Already Fighting

awww...that's really cute...i like those names...anyway, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like them too

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 06/13/07 17:21
Chapter: Already Fighting

yay!!! i'm glad that thisis updated.... when i saw the chapter title, i thought that Ginny and Harry were fighting... lol guess not

Author's Response: No more Harry and Ginny fights for a few more chaps....

Reviewer: Ginny663
Date: 06/13/07 16:02
Chapter: Already Fighting

yay! so glad for the update, it has been a while, but great job with this chappie!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry about the wait!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 06/13/07 14:59
Chapter: Already Fighting

awww thats well sweet!!! i loved it, 1 slight critisism though,....UPDATE QUICKLY please! :D lol,soz but i am pretty impatient. apart from that its perfect

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to hurry!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:41
Chapter: " I need a drink..."

Soo happy!

Author's Response: Thanks, told you you'd like it!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:36
Chapter: Already Fighting

Awwwww.. I REALLY hope it's two girls, but anything is good. Hopefully they just don't end up like Gred and Forge!!

Author's Response: teehee....

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:33
Chapter: Master Dust Buster

Just 2 letcha know: naive, not niave. It bugs me when people misspell words. But great story other than that! Love the "Master Dust Buster" part!

Author's Response: Sorry! I'll get to that. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/13/07 14:07
Chapter: Already Fighting

i love it! yea, it's the next chapter! can't wait to read the next!!!!!

Author's Response: I know! It's coming, promise!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:04
Chapter: Life Must Go On, No Matter What

Heh Heh Heh. I like the part
"'No, not the puppy eyes, please Ginny, I have to do work,' pleaded Harry"
So funny!

Author's Response: Ginny knows how to get her way, thats for sure!!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:02
Chapter: Breaking the News

I think the potions part was confusing, but good, and the names part was really funny, too!

Author's Response: errr...sorry! I like picking names...

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 14:00
Chapter: Morning Sickness part II

Sad, but still a good story!

Author's Response: Thanks, it gets better!

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 06/13/07 13:59
Chapter: Prologue-Morning Sickness

I like Ginny's scream when she first realizes she missed something! It's cute and a little funny!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 06/13/07 12:46
Chapter: Already Fighting

This was a really good chapter - even if the formatting was all wrong. But,I don't think Harry would name his kid Harry. I like Anna-Leah, but not Harry Jr. Yeah, just my opinion.


Author's Response: Yeah, I fixed, Thanks! I am glad you liked it! Well, they will be calling him James.

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