Reviewer: nikkiolapotter
Date: 04/11/07 13:24
Chapter: Giant Squid's Garden

I love it! It was so much fun beta-ing this- creative but believable!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! It was great working with you!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 03/28/07 11:37
Chapter: Giant Squid's Garden

*waves* I didn't know you had poems up until I read your Poetry Library post! I love Octopus' Garden, so thought I'd come check this out!

You kept the rhythm really smooth and consistent throughout this poem, it's perfect. And the rhyme too fitted very well. I love the way that you've told the whole story in a series of very short lines, it's very clever!

Very nice. Keep up the good work!

~Suzie

Author's Response: Hi! *waves back* Thanks for your amazing review. :) It really made my day. Fun fact: I was actually going to write this as a one-shot but seeing as I have the attention span of a...well, something with a really short attention span, I figured I would write a poem instead. :D Thanks again! *huggles* ~Sammie

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 02/15/07 15:07
Chapter: Giant Squid's Garden

cute!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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