I love your style, and I really like Tracy. It proves what JKR said about not all Slytherins being the sons and daughters of Death Eaters. Lovely!
I really really like this idea. I'm also curious about the prejudices of the houses. Good writing and I can't wait for more from you!
I liked it are you writing more please!!!
I was thinking along the same lines for a while when I read the book. I'm glad someone wrote about it. Funny, it says that this story is done. It really doesn't feel like it. Are you going to write another chapter?
Very interesting questions - especialy her question about Dumbledore. They don't seem to be first years - why has Harry not noticed this person before, if they've been in double potions together for years? I await your update!