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Name: bellyjeanie (Signed) · Date: 02/14/11 18:29 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
This was a great story. I liked how Snape was actually nice and it showed that he had a heart, something that most people ignore. Great job!


Name: secret_lover (Signed) · Date: 09/17/08 0:45 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
This story shows a different side of Snape, that we don't see very often. I like how it shows glimpses of his childhood, and his rarely-ever-noticed protective side. It is a charming, heart-warming story. I really enjoied seeing Snape's life being mimicked in young Anne Rhys. And how Snape made her day alittle better, even just by walking with her. I loved it.


Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 17:39 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
Excellent. I really love how you've shown the human side of Snape here. He wasn't just exasperated at Hermione asking about love potions, but concerned that she was considering using one on Lockhart (well I think i'd be concerned too). And he felt a sort of conncetion to Anne as he realised their similar backgrounds. I knew he had a heart, even before DH I knew.


Name: Sariana (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 14:40 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
Very nice story. Did you get the idea for James's prank from The Parent Trap (Hayley Mills version)?

I love Snape, and it is wonderful when someone can capture his humanity without going OOC. Nice job.


Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 09/26/07 16:03 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
I liked it! Good job!


Name: DailyProphetEditor (Signed) · Date: 03/26/07 10:06 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
This story really surprised me!

The title suggested it'd be one of those humor fics that make you laught out loud, but where really everyone goes OOC.

But no, your's is great. I loved Hermione asking about love potions with Lockhart in her mind, I did laugh loudly at that part. But the part with Anne was quite sad, really, yet so realistic.

And I liked Snape actually being friendly to a student without going OOC. Really, a good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, poor Hermione... she kind of left herself open for that. But I am glad you liked the part between Snape and Anne, and that you felt Snape stayed in character.


Name: DailyProphetEditor (Signed) · Date: 03/26/07 10:06 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
This story really surprised me!

The title suggested it'd be one of those humor fics that make you laught out loud, but where really everyone goes OOC.

But no, your's is great. I loved Hermione asking about love potions with Lockhart in her mind, I did laugh loudly at that part. But the part with Anne was quite sad, really, yet so realistic.

And I liked Snape actually being friendly to a student without going OOC. Really, a good job!


Name: phoenix_fille (Signed) · Date: 02/13/07 20:26 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
Sweet story. Maybe I'll actually be in a good mood for Valentine's day.

Author's Response: I hope it did cheer up your Valentine's Day! And remember, no matter how bad your Valentine's Day was, you probablyl didn't have to go running for your dorm room with the back of your robes clutched in your hand! *snicker*


Name: Gmariam (Signed) · Date: 02/13/07 15:44 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
That was really sweet! You did a great job with Snape's character, I loved the insight into James Potter's Valentine's Day prank. Hermione's scene with Snape was hilarious, did she really want the potion for Lockhart or is that just what Snape thought? I really liked the scene with Anne. What a great character! She had a very nice connection with Snape, and it was nice to see his softer side for that brief moment. Lovely job, thanks for taking on the prompt and writing such a wonderful story!! Happy Valentine's Day! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I enjoyed writing it. Yeah, I thought Hermione was smitten enough with Lockhart just at that point to be courageous and ask. She did have Lockhart's "get well" card under her pillow in the hospital wing. I imagine that would be an embarrasing little thing for her to remember in later years. You can see why she didn't bring Harry or Ron with her!


Name: HJPCATI (Signed) · Date: 02/13/07 15:35 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
Aw, so Snape is more human than most give him credit for. I have to admit that I loved the prank that James Potter played on him, too.

Author's Response: That prank seemed like a typical James Potter prank. And I do like to show Snape's human side. JKR's stories are from Harry's point of view, and alas, Harry has little interest in Snape's human side! So it's up to us brave fanfic writers to fill everyone in on the details.


Name: ProfPosky (Signed) · Date: 02/13/07 14:28 · For: Snape's Valentine's Day
OOH, nice! And I think Anne asked a very good question. I would also wonder just how her ... er--interesting...mother happened to snare her really really nice father.

I also think it is very nice, and very well handled, that there is a moment of unspoken sympathy for Snape (Which is, I am sure, the only kind he could stand) and that his day was not as awful as he expected. I also think you did a good job with Hermione.

It is very interesting, btw, to see her as a side character...

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I intend to make Anne's family situation clear in future stories. And Anne's questions would have to be different from Hermione's, owing to their very different backgrounds.


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