Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 04/26/07 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 3 The Importance of Being Whole

Woot! Another great chapter! If you don't know, I'm one of your Betas for Chapter Four. Sorry it's taking so long! I haven't had a chance to read yet, and now here I am! I will do Chapter Four tomorrow, and you should have it back soon!

Also, I wanted to comment on your OC, Albright. She is great. You did wonderful. Good job.

Author's Response: Yes, I know you're my beta and I appreciate everything you've been able to do for me thus far

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 04/26/07 20:39
Chapter: Chapter 2 From Seed to Harvest

Another great chapter. Yay for Harry/Ginny! I assume this means Ron/Hermione in the next chapter? I guess I'll go find out! Onto the next one (and by the way, I really SHOULD be doing homework, but this is too captivating to not read).

Author's Response: It's grea that you are enjoying the story

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 04/26/07 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 1Return to Origins

Hi! I can't really leave a long review, because I want to go read the next chapter! I just wanted to say that this is really very good. I'm very captivated. One thing I wanted to say was that 'Alright' is incorrect. It is properly spelled 'All Right'. I know, it's a very common mistake, so it makes me somewhat obsessive about it. On the next chapter I go!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Oh and don't worry, I appreciate it when people take the time to help me with corrections

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