Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 10/08/07 1:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very cute :-)
I can't find anything that could be improved, so I'm just reviewing to say... I like it a lot! Keep up the good work :-)

~ Cirelondiel


Author's Response: Thank you!! ~ Teresa

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 04/14/07 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, this is funny. :D Very amusing and light and happy - a nice change in most poetry on this site.

I liked the beat to this - in the ballad form, I don't think you missed a single beat. Wonderful job. Your rhyming was amazing, too. It also helped the flow of this ballad. Great job.

I love that last stanza. I don't know why - it's just so...funny, really. :-) Amazing.

~Kate

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing this poem because it was so light-hearted. Most things I write are dark, and this was a nice change. ~ Teresa

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 03/15/07 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cute. This was really well written. I loved your odd choice of character for a poem. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Dobby. He's adorable.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 02/15/07 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, that's so cute! You recounted the story through the ballad well. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Soupdragon
Date: 02/15/07 10:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

So cute! Loved this so much!


Author's Response: Thanks!

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