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Name: marigold_blossom (Anonymous) · Date: 02/17/07 10:00 · For: Chapter 1
This was good! I liked the all the details about the locker room and his nerves.
To me, that doesn't seem like Krum's character but he's not exactly my favorite so I don't really know that much about him.
I only noticed one spelling error. You just forgot the 't' on the end of thought in the eighth paragraph.
I really liked thjis one! Keep writing!


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