Reviews For Torn
Reviewer: Kezzabear
Date: 03/29/07 0:05
Chapter: Chapter 3, ASBO's, Aunt's and Hogwarts.

I am liking this story so far, yes i certianly am! Hope you continue it.

It has very inriguing elements to it.

None the least of which is Harry really dead...dum, dum, duuum! lol

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afraid that Harry really is dead. :(

Reviewer: later
Date: 03/11/07 23:14
Chapter: Chapter 2, Bursting Bubbles

You really do know how to right tear jerkers. I think this is a marvelous fic thus far. I really do hope Daisy goes to Hogwarts!

Author's Response: Yup, sad things are my speciality! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 03/07/07 5:53
Chapter: Chapter 2, Bursting Bubbles

That was anather sad chapter but I liked the way you wrote it. Come to think of it, I like pretty much everything you write. I just have one question. Did Harry really die?Please say no.=Sammy
P.S. Can you please update your The Third war. I'm dying to find out what happens to Lily, Jamie, Sirius and the gang.

Author's Response: Sorry, Harry's dead. **Sobs** I do have a chapter in the queue for third War, but the mods are taking their own sweet time about it. **Taps foot impatiently** Thank you for reading and reviewing, as you can probably tell, I'm quite short on reviews for this story, so every one makes me smile! ~Evie

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 02/25/07 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 1, My family.

I have to say, you are dealing with the autism very well. I have an autistic brother, and I can share some of Daisy's burden (except, my mom isn't very depressed). I watch him all the time. You haven't offended me in any way, and I think you are pulling of the autistic bit off quite well.

Your fic is great so far! Update it soon please!


--Hanni

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad I haven't offended anyone! The next chapter is in the queue. ~Evie

Reviewer: lifewrite
Date: 02/22/07 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 1, My family.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I really think that you potray Daisy well. Coming from a single parent home I can realte to her feeling like she has to be a responsible adult so soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually come from a happy, problemless family, so I had to do a lot of research and this was very hard to write, so I'm glad someone thinks that I did a good job on it. Unfortunatly, updates on this may be a little slow, due to how hard this fic is to write. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 02/17/07 22:00
Chapter: Chapter 1, My family.

Great job.Will poor Daisy ever get to go to Hogwarts?
Sorry but Ginny seems majorly out of character to me( and my mum ). Samehow, I don't think she'd fall apart like that if anything happened to Harry.She'd be strong for her family.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I see where you're coming from, but Ginny just snapped when Harriet was born and she found out that she had to raise two children,one of which was autistic, on her own, without Harry. I appreciate your view, though!

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