Reviews For River Styx
Reviewer: x_Marsh_Mellow_x
Date: 03/18/05 14:24
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

UPDATE!~ Only bad authors are allowd to drift off the side of the world and disappear! 10/10

Reviewer: Padfoot Tiger
Date: 03/16/05 12:27
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

another wonderful, brilliant, amazing chapter! i'm twitching with anticipation, as my good freind Lily would say.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/13/05 16:12
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

"I’m getting the impression, Mr Lupin, that I should have wondered more often who was behind Mr Black’s and Mr Potter’s pranks.” That was amusing. Anyway, this is one of the most incredible fics I have ever read. I wish I could give you 1000/10!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Personally, I intended the finger to remind of Peter, of course, but I guess there are quite some bitten off fingers in literature.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/13/05 13:59
Chapter: Teeth and Claws

I know it isn't really funny, but I laughed when I read this chapter because it reminded me of how Frodo had a finger bitten off in Lord of the Rings. 10!

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/11/05 20:28
Chapter: Plotting

The Count of Monte Christo ia great, just like your fan fiction!!!

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/11/05 20:17
Chapter: Not Everyone's Bound to Love You

I've always thought Sirius and Severus were a lot alike. Excellent!!! 10/10 for you!!!

Reviewer: zonkos
Date: 03/10/05 15:47
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

"a cocktail of terror, sweetened with madness.." i love this line. ur story is going great and ur really good! it is obvious that u did alot of reasearch and thinking about ur story. i am very interested in how you potrayed Snape's history. it's extremely realistic and so is Lupin. keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/10/05 9:23
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

Hmmm...that means he would have been 19 when he graduated, if he was 22 three years later in 1981. I suppose it could happen... Great story anyway, and thanks for responding!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 03/09/05 10:29
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow! I love this story so much! That was a great chapter, it really, really was - well done! Just one thing - J.K said that James died when he was about 22, so if he died in 1981, when Harry was one year old, then they should have graduated in 1976. Just a little thing - no worries. Well done on this story - it's amazing! 10/10

Author's Response: But the marauders were all born in 1960. They started school eleven years later, in 1971, and graduated in the spring of 1978. (at least the hp-lexcion gives their birthdate as 1960). James could still have been about 22 in '81. Thanks for the praise :)

Reviewer: Axelia
Date: 03/09/05 8:56
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

I really liked this chapter! :) This is one of my favourite stories on this site...Hope they'll manage to save dumbledore! I'm lookin forward to read the next chapter, please update it soon!:)

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 03/07/05 17:44
Chapter: Twenty-one Days

Excellent chapter. Please update soon, I want to read more!

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 02/28/05 18:28
Chapter: Cold Turkey

I love the way Lupin and Snape's attitudes toward each other are becoming less hostile with each chapter... but subtly so... well, I hate to echo everyone else who reviews, but... I can't help it... I love your story.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Lupin's and Snape's relation really is what this story is about, so your praise makes me happy! I think that they are two very lonely men who could both do with a little company.

Reviewer: Padfoot Tiger
Date: 02/26/05 17:42
Chapter: Cold Turkey siriusly this is like so cool the writing is sooooo BEAUTIFUL i'm on the edge here you are so good and so is this plot....wowie pleeeease wriiiiteeee morrrrre on the edge excellent PS. good luck with those exams!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/25/05 10:23
Chapter: Not Everyone's Bound to Love You

mmm. interesting...

Reviewer: tonks442
Date: 02/24/05 22:50
Chapter: Cold Turkey

Great story! I love the relationship between Remus and Snape...;) I absolutely love this story just because it is really deep, and keeps you on your toes. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: hermionestwin
Date: 02/23/05 22:35
Chapter: Cold Turkey

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! you are such a talented writer!!!!!!! i luv ur story and have read all of ur chapters. i added u on to my fav stories list

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 02/23/05 21:08
Chapter: Twenty-one Days

Intriguing! You certainly put Lupin and Snape in a dilemma, I wonder how they'll figure this one out. I shall read the next chapter to see what happens next......

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/23/05 10:44
Chapter: Twenty-one Days

That's really good. Normally I put some constructive criticism in my reviews but, I, um, can't think of any. ;)

Reviewer: Phoenixs Ashes
Date: 02/22/05 19:00
Chapter: Cold Turkey

Its so suspenseful!!! OMG!!!

Reviewer: Kira
Date: 02/21/05 22:24
Chapter: Cold Turkey

lovely storie! watch out for pancake batter its sticky keep on!!! 10 10 10 10

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