Reviews For River Styx
Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 06/18/05 6:40
Chapter: Dead Things

Oh my God, you are fantastic!!! I'm going to print out this story so I can read it over and over again. You have a wonderfully complex imagination. 10/10

Reviewer: Fizzing Whizzbee
Date: 06/16/05 20:04
Chapter: Dead Things

Oooh! Creepy...I love it. Please update! Don't leave us hanging like that! 10/10

Reviewer: Polaris Dakota
Date: 06/09/05 21:02
Chapter: Twenty-one Days

Eat the barmy old codger, Remus. Its no less than the arse desirves.

Reviewer: dmc
Date: 05/26/05 14:14
Chapter: Legilimency

Very good. This is one of my fav fanfics as Lupin is one of my favorite characters. Please update soon.

Reviewer: littlebabywerewolf
Date: 05/18/05 17:43
Chapter: Legilimency

That was so cool. 10/10. Absolutely love it. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 05/01/05 7:18
Chapter: Legilimency

Oh I'm going to kill you for leaving it like that!!!!! 10/10!!!! That was amazing!!!

Reviewer: Kira
Date: 04/24/05 1:05
Chapter: Legilimency

oh my gosh this was the best chapter ever!!! WONDERFUL!!!! so is regulus The Big V? or a zombie? ohhh this was so wonderful!!!!! please update soonnnn 10/10

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 04/23/05 14:33
Chapter: Legilimency

It was so creepy! I really liked when Lupin realized everything at once - how he hadn't complained about being tied or eaten or used the bathroom or anything - that was done well. In suspense here! Ah, well, I'll have to wait.

Reviewer: zonkos
Date: 04/23/05 14:25
Chapter: Legilimency

wow... that was soo weird.... how can he be dead and still talking??.... that was a good chapter though.. waiting for the next chap anxiously!

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 04/22/05 22:10
Chapter: Legilimency

1st reviewer!!! Oh. My. Gosh. Regulus is DEAD?!?!?!?!?!?! What a huge shock! I am so intriuged to learn what happens next; please, please update! This is what a 10/10 is!!!

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 04/08/05 14:03
Chapter: The Cat in the Grass

Loved the Hermione and Crookshanks part, and tis just like Remmy not to let Snape use the Criciatus Curse. I hope McGonagall is okay, and what's going to happen with Regulus? This keeps getting better and better! 10/10 Please update quicker than you did last time.

Reviewer: immortal_evil
Date: 04/07/05 19:42
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

wow, this chapter was really long. so in my tight schedule, i managed to read it in a week!!! 10!

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 04/04/05 17:00
Chapter: The Cat in the Grass

Oddly enough, I did realize it had to be Crookshanks... but I def. wasn't expecting Hermione to show up. That was awesome. Hermione's dialogue and decription were excellent. I loved all your descriptions in this chapter; of voices, facial expressions, and the smells of the forest. Also, I like how you manage to make things very clear to the reader without going into a lot of unnecessary detail. Like here: He [Remus] would not use Cruciatus to make someone talk. He had been a friend of Frank and Alice Longbottom. - I really, really liked this chapter; it's one of my favorites and one of your best, I think. Okayyy, gotta stop rambling now.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 04/04/05 6:37
Chapter: The Cat in the Grass

I didn't know it was Crookshanks either - until Hermione showed up - great job! Loved the "good cop, bad cop" scenario.

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 04/03/05 17:19
Chapter: The Cat in the Grass

I didn't know it was Crookshanks... I was thinking, "What's the deal with that cat?" until Hermione showed up. Incredible chapter, update soon!

Reviewer: Arianna of Bellezza
Date: 04/02/05 17:27
Chapter: The Cat in the Grass

Ooohhh. GREAT chapter. It was wonderful with Hermione. When Crookshanks appeared, I thought, so what? He's just a cat. Then Hermione showed up- that was wonderful.

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 04/02/05 9:10
Chapter: Twenty-one Days

YES!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! I'm so happy!

Reviewer: Phoenixs Ashes
Date: 03/23/05 18:09
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

I like your story a lot, I think its quite different, which is good. I think that you should keep Harry, Ron, and Hermione out of this story as much as possible, and continue on finding about Snape from Lupin's point of view. Awesome writing so far, keep it up please!

Reviewer: Kira
Date: 03/19/05 23:14
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

this is officialy on my top ten list of favorite storys ever!!!! yeah snape yeah lupin super yeah!!!!

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 03/19/05 13:21
Chapter: Merlin's Sleep

Absolutely amazing story! Each chapter is like a gift. The comment by Professor McGonagall at the end made me smile and of course, I add, update soon! *I'm also putting this on my favorites list.*

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