Brilliant! This is a fantastic, fluent story. I love the way you have four scenes that contrast so much, yet you can link them together so impressively.
My favourite 'story' is probably Petunia's, as you have caputured her character so perfectly and written this part in an excellent way. I would in fact say that all of the characterisation was very good, but Petunia's especially.
A lovely, refreshingly different story. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.