Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 08/15/07 15:27
Chapter: New Beginnings

Wow, that chapter actually had me fighting back tears. well done. well done.

Reviewer: Platnumkid
Date: 07/06/07 13:11
Chapter: New Beginnings

I absolutely loved this story. A little sappy at the end, but i loved that too!

Fabulous work, you should write more!

SPOILER ALERT!!!!!

when the stranger had mousy-brown hair, i thought it was colin creevy still in search of his hero. You tricked me good.

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 06/30/07 17:45
Chapter: New Beginnings

OMG!!!!oh my giddy-god! simply fabulous and spiffing dahling. I cried sooo much. Perfect touch with how Lily couldn't talk properly,lol. loved it tonnes lol. very good author/authoress :D

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/28/07 18:13
Chapter: New Beginnings

Aaaaaaw! That was sooooo sweet! Thanks a lot for sharing your story with us!

Reviewer: moon_girl_175
Date: 06/13/07 11:39
Chapter: The battle

this was very good

Reviewer: MrsH
Date: 06/10/07 9:55
Chapter: The battle

Oh, dear! Nice story until the last sentence -- then the worst cliffhanger I've ever seen on the site. What a terrible thing for the site manager to do to readers! List a fic as "completed", then put "next" at the end of the "last" chapter....then post a "not validated" page so you can't finish it. Truly sucks -- and I don't mean the author's work, either. Good writing!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 06/01/07 12:39
Chapter: The battle

omg! thats sooo sad i almost cried at the end!
He was holding her in his arms for the first time as his wife, as his lover. They were just about to kiss when the world went black.
awwwwww :( you are one FAB writer, keep it up!!!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 06/01/07 8:27
Chapter: The battle

Thank you for updating so quickly. Keep it up! So far, so good.

Reviewer: jjceeyore
Date: 06/01/07 0:04
Chapter: The battle

that was good keep up the good writeing i want to read more. what happens next please get to writing i want more please please please

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 05/31/07 23:40
Chapter: The battle

Please update soon!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 05/24/07 14:02
Chapter: The Spy

Update soon please.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 05/23/07 22:35
Chapter: The Spy

Wow! We're going to where we are supposed to be!
Update soon, please!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 05/23/07 17:39
Chapter: The Spy

oooooh this is getting tense! loving your story btw! you are an ace writer!

Reviewer: Prongs56
Date: 05/23/07 16:45
Chapter: The Spy

I like your story keep updating!

Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 05/23/07 16:40
Chapter: The Spy

This is a really clever story, I really like it. I'm glad he found out how evil they were before he went into battle! Please update quickly :)

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 05/11/07 12:23
Chapter: The Wizards' Society

This is really sounding like a very dark wizards' society. I don't like Harry associated with them.
When are the decent wizards going to shou up to save thedad?
Nice chapter, though.

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 05/11/07 10:44
Chapter: The Wizards' Society

This is a very interesting story. Update quickly please.

Reviewer: Danny1234
Date: 04/16/07 21:11
Chapter: John Doe

I think your story is great!
Please update.

Reviewer: jjceeyore
Date: 03/25/07 20:24
Chapter: Answers

i can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 03/16/07 19:16
Chapter: Answers

I don't like Derek! He sounds very much like a Deaty Eater or such. Let's hope someone with real sense comes into town and puts John (Harry) back where he belongs.
Your story is good, please update soon.

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