Wow, that chapter actually had me fighting back tears. well done. well done.
I absolutely loved this story. A little sappy at the end, but i loved that too!
Fabulous work, you should write more!
when the stranger had mousy-brown hair, i thought it was colin creevy still in search of his hero. You tricked me good.
OMG!!!!oh my giddy-god! simply fabulous and spiffing dahling. I cried sooo much. Perfect touch with how Lily couldn't talk properly,lol. loved it tonnes lol. very good author/authoress :D
Aaaaaaw! That was sooooo sweet! Thanks a lot for sharing your story with us!
this was very good
Oh, dear! Nice story until the last sentence -- then the worst cliffhanger I've ever seen on the site. What a terrible thing for the site manager to do to readers! List a fic as "completed", then put "next" at the end of the "last" chapter....then post a "not validated" page so you can't finish it. Truly sucks -- and I don't mean the author's work, either. Good writing!
omg! thats sooo sad i almost cried at the end!
He was holding her in his arms for the first time as his wife, as his lover. They were just about to kiss when the world went black.
awwwwww :( you are one FAB writer, keep it up!!!
Thank you for updating so quickly. Keep it up! So far, so good.
that was good keep up the good writeing i want to read more. what happens next please get to writing i want more please please please
Please update soon!
Update soon please.
Wow! We're going to where we are supposed to be!
Update soon, please!
oooooh this is getting tense! loving your story btw! you are an ace writer!
I like your story keep updating!
This is a really clever story, I really like it. I'm glad he found out how evil they were before he went into battle! Please update quickly :)
This is really sounding like a very dark wizards' society. I don't like Harry associated with them.
When are the decent wizards going to shou up to save thedad?
Nice chapter, though.
This is a very interesting story. Update quickly please.
I think your story is great!
i can't wait for the next chapter
I don't like Derek! He sounds very much like a Deaty Eater or such. Let's hope someone with real sense comes into town and puts John (Harry) back where he belongs.
Your story is good, please update soon.