Reviewer: Maddie Potter
Date: 04/14/12 6:16
Chapter: Bethrothal

I don't know if you're still working on this, but here goes...

I'd like to be a cameo Rebel named Maddie, short for Madeline, who is some long lost relative of Harry's that he doesn't know about yet and thinks is just another DA member.

I've always been a big fan of Neville/Luna, so maybe Ron could want to be more helpful and trek out to the wall with Hermione and Luna to work on it because he's bored or something?

Tom could make Ginny wear a dark greenish red dress that she hates but must wear because she must obey him?

Great job so far and pweez don't abandon it!

Reviewer: MrsPotter6
Date: 01/22/12 18:31
Chapter: Bethrothal

please write another chapter soon! this story is amazing

Reviewer: Ginger13
Date: 08/23/11 21:52
Chapter: Prologue

this story is wonderful!!! i've read this story so many times..please write the next chapters soon..im dieing to find out what happens with ginny :)

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 12/20/10 15:44
Chapter: Bethrothal

I like this fic! I especially agree with your decision for Voldemort to become handsome again. Handsome villains are always more intimidating in my opinion. I think that Neville's love interest should be Luna. Ginny's ball gown should be silver and pale blue, sleeveless, and long. In general, I would like to see Harry see her and think she actually chose to marry him. That should be interesting.

Reviewer: Dr Filibuster
Date: 09/09/08 22:48
Chapter: Bethrothal

wow, really well written and creative.

Reviewer: Prewettsagain
Date: 11/12/07 19:00
Chapter: Bethrothal

I love the background setting in this story of the wall and rule of Voldemort. Please come back and update this!
Also, i think you should try to add Dean and Seamus back in.
CAmeo
-Dale Prewett, son of the prewetts/cousin to Weasley kids/some distant but definate relation
Average height, light brown short hair, light skinned. good dueling skills/leadership abilities. You dont have to use this idea, but I would have him come in with a large group of refugees which he has helped lead to London.

Reviewer: Newbierbee
Date: 10/11/07 16:49
Chapter: Prologue

not trying to be that annoying hyperactive person but plz plz plz plz write the next part!:)

Reviewer: Ginny H Potter
Date: 09/05/07 3:59
Chapter: Bethrothal

her gown should either be red or black without any sleves.it should be full lenght and shimmery.

Reviewer: Newbierbee
Date: 09/03/07 14:52
Chapter: Prologue

um..are you writing the next part?i really want to read what happens next becuz its a really good story.

Reviewer: Newbierbee
Date: 08/11/07 10:46
Chapter: Prologue

spectacular story so far and i think its great how you have all the twist in turns.
also i think there should be a big final duel between harry and voldemort at the wedding but its only a suggestion because i just think harry should be the knight in shining armor again for ginny and save her hey but thats just me anyways

for nevilles love interest i would have to go with luna because they would make the perfect couple.
alos for ginnys dress i think it should be a very dark shade of green and and black tiaria with green diamonds and thorns at the top it would make her look you know sorta evil in a way.anyways when are you writing the next part?

Reviewer: FlyingPheonix
Date: 05/28/07 19:21
Chapter: Bethrothal

Green, for slytherin! That would make Harry even angrier! :)

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 05/12/07 14:40
Chapter: Bethrothal

I love your story so far, its really original. I think Ginny's dress should be green silk with black lace - a really long flowing design. For some reason i think Nevilles assistant should be Parvati Patil because she seems a bit like a romantic.
Cameo: name-Abrar, Wizard rebel, curly black hair, brown eyes, dark skin, maybe used to work in the three broomsticks

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 05/06/07 0:44
Chapter: Prologue

Interesting

Reviewer: Romilda Vane
Date: 04/21/07 10:53
Chapter: Bethrothal

Wow! I love your story. It's great because it's one of a kind - I don't think iv'e seen any other interactive stories. Really great!!!

I think Neville's assistant should be Hannah Abbot.

Ginny should have a deep emerald dress I think.

I'm not exactly full of ideas in general, so I have none for the next chapter - sorry! But i will say that it should be unexpected. I like a surprise!

CAMEO - Lucy, petite, Tawny curls, Flecked grey eyes. Nor a girl of many words. Nobody knows who exactly she is, where she's from or where she's going. Not a Deatheater or a wizard rebel particularly.

Again - great story!

~ Kate

Reviewer: Romilda Vane
Date: 04/21/07 10:46
Chapter: Announcement

Wow! I love your story. It's great because it's one of a kind - I don't think iv'e seen any other interactive stories. Really great!!!

I think Neville's assistant should be Hannah Abbot.

Ginny should have a deep emerald dress I think.

I'm not exactly full of ideas in general, so I have none for the next chapter - sorry! But i will say that it should be unexpected. I like a surprise!

CAMEO - Lucy, petite, Tawny curls, Flecked grey eyes. Not a girl of many words. Nobody knows who exactly she is, where she's from or where she's going. Not a Deatheater or a wizard rebel particularly.

Again - great story!

~Lucy

Author's Response: I like your character. There will be a bit of a twist at the end of the next chapter. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: silverwing
Date: 04/21/07 0:32
Chapter: Bethrothal

great chapter once again, I love the idea of interactive writting, I think that the assitent should be hannah abbot and for ginnys dress:dark green with silver embroidary? or what ever, again wonderful chapter.


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hpbh8r
Date: 04/20/07 18:48
Chapter: Bethrothal

hey i had like this idea to get susan bones. and ginnyis dress should be gold with green accents (my prom dress).
~kim

Author's Response: Your prom dress? Cool!

Reviewer: Elody_Evenstar
Date: 04/20/07 15:38
Chapter: Bethrothal

What about Romilda Vane? She might of got over her crush on Harry and gone to the person who is nearly the same age? Oh my name is Cally. Ginny's dress should have diamonds on it.

Author's Response: Romilda Vane... Hmm....

Reviewer: rising phoenix
Date: 04/20/07 15:31
Chapter: Bethrothal

wow this is really good. ginnys ball gown should be strapless black silk collum and she should wear a tiara of silver and diamonds with the dark mark.please pu me in as a goodie called esther

Author's Response: A tiara? Good idea... (not sure about the dark mark though :)) Do you have a certain somebody you want to be in the story, or should I just put you in wherever?

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 04/20/07 11:13
Chapter: Bethrothal

my name is Rozlyn, i would love to be a wizarding rebel in this story, i always like Neville to be with Luna, but Susan Bones is good for him too, I think. I am invisioning a black gown for Ginny, black lace, with cream fabric peeking through faux tears in the black, low shoulders. i dunno how else to describe it, ; ) but rest assured, i see it in my mind!

Author's Response: Cool dress. Any other details I should know about you?

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