Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 02/10/07 15:37
Chapter: Fixing Broken Hearts

All I can say is ...Whoa, is it getting hot in here.

Author's Response: lol, thank you

Reviewer: wvrickey
Date: 02/10/07 5:27
Chapter: Fixing Broken Hearts

nnnnooooooooooooooooooot gooooood

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel so. But the story is clearly rated as Professors with a sexual warning. And since you did not take the time to tell me why you think the story isn't good, then I won't waste my time defending my story.

Reviewer: stefi9
Date: 02/09/07 18:22
Chapter: Fixing Broken Hearts

is this same alcove that dean was caught snogging with ginny? because if so thats creepy.8/10 only because i thought it was a bit fast

Author's Response: lol, no I think that was actually a passage, and yes that would be creepy.

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/09/07 15:57
Chapter: Fixing Broken Hearts

I like the idea of Dean/ Lavender but wasn't that a little fast? I mean, one moment their complaining, then they're snogging and then they're screwing. Other than that, it was pretty good.

Author's Response: Yes, yes it was fast, but it is a one shot and is a simple story.

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