Reviews For Ron's New Life
Reviewer: fergiefan
Date: 09/04/07 18:40
Chapter: Broken Hearts

i love it!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Nadia Malfoy
Date: 06/07/07 19:17
Chapter: A Bond of Friendship

Quite good..... the first chapter made me cry.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I was aiming for so I'm glad!

Reviewer: HalfBloodKween
Date: 03/08/07 7:47
Chapter: A New Friend

Just wanted to point out a bit of a blooper, in case you hadn't noticed it. You repeated part of this sentence...
“Somehow I don’t think it’s the same think it’s the same thing…”

Apart from that, this chapter was really good. You can really feel Ron's torment. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you I'll have to go fix that!

Reviewer: HalfBloodKween
Date: 03/08/07 7:25
Chapter: Broken Hearts

Awww! Hermione isn't my favourite character, but I almost cried reading this chapter! *sob*
I feel so bad for Ron...
Good work. Very powerful words.

Author's Response: Thank you, it took me a long time to write this story because I wanted it to sound powerful. Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 02/20/07 16:11
Chapter: Broken Hearts

Wow that was intense! I had tears in the first chapter and they didn't go away in the second chapter! Great job. I felt and connected with Ron's sadness, guilt, and anger through your writing. Amazing, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Awww thanks! That makes me feel good!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 02/19/07 18:24
Chapter: Broken Hearts

That was very good!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: XColliFlourX
Date: 02/10/07 15:10
Chapter: Broken Hearts

Wow ron must have been pouring his heart into that speach coz that was great! ;) The speach was class! You captured the emotions perfectly and i cant wait to read more!
keep up the good work!
XColliFlourX

Author's Response: yeah, i'm new to this...sorry I sent you another response somewhere else but now I know how this works so I want to thank you again for your review.

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