i love it!
Author's Response: :)
Quite good..... the first chapter made me cry.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I was aiming for so I'm glad!
Just wanted to point out a bit of a blooper, in case you hadn't noticed it. You repeated part of this sentence...
“Somehow I don’t think it’s the same think it’s the same thing…”
Apart from that, this chapter was really good. You can really feel Ron's torment. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you I'll have to go fix that!
Awww! Hermione isn't my favourite character, but I almost cried reading this chapter! *sob*
I feel so bad for Ron...
Good work. Very powerful words.
Author's Response: Thank you, it took me a long time to write this story because I wanted it to sound powerful. Thank you for your comment!
Wow that was intense! I had tears in the first chapter and they didn't go away in the second chapter! Great job. I felt and connected with Ron's sadness, guilt, and anger through your writing. Amazing, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Awww thanks! That makes me feel good!
That was very good!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!
Wow ron must have been pouring his heart into that speach coz that was great! ;) The speach was class! You captured the emotions perfectly and i cant wait to read more!
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: yeah, i'm new to this...sorry I sent you another response somewhere else but now I know how this works so I want to thank you again for your review.