aww
that made me feel quite sad =[
lily =[
everyone always cares about lily
twas all james' fault really ;)
xx
aww
that made me feel quite sad =[
lily =[
everyone always cares about lily
twas all james' fault really ;)
xx
that was so sad for him. I really liked it it brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: Well thank you very, very much.!
Oh, soooooooooooo great! You really did well on making Lily into something real. I almost cried!
Author's Response: thanks!
Oh, soooooooooooo great! You really did well on making Lily into something real. I almost cried!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! It sounds mean, but it's good for me that you almost cried...lol.
Okay, just looked at the rest of your reviews and just thought I should let you know that the 2 reviewers before me must not know what they're talking about. Don't listen to them. Oh, and once again, LOVE it. ;)
Author's Response: Haha...I listen to all my reviewers! But yeah, I tried to explain my points. I have another story on HPFF, which has been there for a while, which I don't think you've read. It's called Too Weak, check it out!
Hey hey, you have another story on here!!! Yay! Why didn't I notice that before? Hmm... I'm just a bit slow I guess... but oh well, now I found it and I would like to let you know that it is BRILLIANT. I love it. It's so sad, so so sad, but still. Excellent. BTW, update Muggle to Witch soon please! And sorry I haven't updated in forever... oops. Bye!
~Marauder_Princess~
Author's Response: yay! You read my other one. Thankee muchly for reading. Hmm yes, you know I would, I've actually finished Muggle to Witch now but Chapter 5 has been rejected twice without an e-mail explaining why...ah well, shall try again.
I find this a bit rushed and confusing though I think the letters themselves are good.
Author's Response: Thank you! The reason the letters are rushed, especially near the end, is because she's going to die. She's panicking, and that would obviously come across in her writing. Thanks again!
I thought it was ok. but when lily was signing the letters don't you think should would have signed them "mom"? Also at the beginning she says i never say we are in hiding but she had a few lines up. also i think you tried to add to much details from the real hp books in. all in all i think it is a great start keep writing loved the plot line
Author's Response: For a start, Lily Evans is English, so she would not have signed them 'Mom', but 'Mum'. You've made a god point, though, and I debated that with myself, but in the end I wanted it to seem more like a diary than anything else. Lily never wrote those letters for Harry to read...do you see? She says that she is refusing to accept that they are in hiding by saying it, and what she says earlier is in fact that they are "supposed to be 'in hiding'". She hates admitting it to others but essentially she realises that she has to accept it. As for adding details from the hp books, I don't quite understand the problem. When writing something like this you have to make it very, very canon, otherwise you slip into AU. Thank you very much for your comments and taking to time to review!
It was fantastic.I luved it.congratulations.keep writing more and more fictions.
Author's Response: thank you so, so much. I will keep writing! If you want more, check out 'Lily Evans - Muggle to Witch'. Thanks again!
This is so sad. :( Good, though,
Author's Response: wow two from the same person! you must like it! thank you!
This is so sad. :(
Author's Response: lol thank you...
