Reviewer: Muggle in the Know
Date: 03/02/10 4:08
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

I merely have one question; How often will you be updating? I only found this stor recently so I don't know what to expect ... Well recently being a month ago ... But you truly can write amazingly.

Reviewer: padfoot2116
Date: 02/21/10 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

please hurry up and write the next chapter! it's so good!

Reviewer: Muggle in the Know
Date: 02/16/10 4:53
Chapter: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

I would just like to let you know that your writing abilities are phenomenal. I love this fanfiction, it's about the third time I'm reading it. I love how you can come up with such an amazing plotline, but still keep your writing so detailed, and the way you put in bits that others may think of not necessary to the plotline, but still make the people seem so much more real. I just love your epic writing. I can't say that enough. Oh and one little thing, it's too late to change it now, but maybe in future fics, the head boy and girl have a dormitory to themselves (common room, head girl's room, and head boy's room) x]

Reviewer: Muggle in the Know
Date: 02/16/10 3:44
Chapter: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

I would just like to let you know that your writing abilities are phenomenal. I love this fanfiction, it's about the third time I'm reading it. I love how you can come up with such an amazing plotline, but still keep your writing so detailed, and the way you put in bits that others may think of not necessary to the plotline, but still make the people seem so much more real. I just love your epic writing. I can't say that enough. Oh and one little thing, it's too late to change it now, but maybe in future fics, the head boy and girl have a dormitory to themselves (common room, head girl's room, and head boy's room) x]

Reviewer: Jolia Potter907
Date: 02/04/10 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

two words.
WRITE! MORE!

Reviewer: LilyRosePotter
Date: 01/26/10 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

oh no! so glad the girls got away...they are totally awesome... can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 01/22/10 9:59
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

I like it. And i'm happy you've updated again.

Reviewer: The-heir-of-Gryffindor
Date: 01/22/10 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

gah! So good! I really hope Sirius like KILLS regulus after the attack and the big kirsty sirius thing happens
FINGERS CROSSED!!!
Enjoy Uni, and good luck nwith the next chapter.
:)

Reviewer: lucca4
Date: 01/18/10 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

I love this fic SOOOO much!!! Please, please try to post the next chapter(s!) soon!! :) Again, great job with this...just started reading it after this chapter was posted (I've been looking for a good Marauder era fanfic)...and I love how you captured Sirius! He has always been my favorite character in the series :)

Reviewer: Lympha
Date: 01/17/10 4:03
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

Wow, it was a truly amazing chapter. I was so happy when Kirsty managed to stun Regulus and Emma came back unharmed. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 01/16/10 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

Ah, thanks for the newest chapter. Honestly, the confrontation is very good, but I didn't go for the writing style of the chapter intro. No dialogue, only omniscient observer narrative. It is much better to discover what the characters are doing by following the twists and turns of their dialogues, instead.

Still, an enjoyable chapter. Much success with your studies and glad to hear another chapter should come soon.

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 01/16/10 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

Amazing! *She says, with an open mouth and boggling eyes.*

It sooo lived up to the expectations, the Kirsty and Regulus scene was mind-blowing. At first, I thought you was going to let her give up! So I was practically dancing when her Kirtsy-ness came through.

I absolutely love the Regulus characterization, his jealously of his brother and rivalry with him. But also him being very evil now :)

Great job, I mean I'm finding hard to say how great it was. As always, you leave me longing for the next part. Yes, I am wondering if they tell the Marauders, and Sirius' reaction !

Lauren

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 01/16/10 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

AHHH!!!! I'm so happy you updated!! It's so good!!! I love it!!

Reviewer: SilverLily
Date: 01/16/10 5:59
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

Kristy is wicked. Love her. :D
Remus and Hayley yay! So happy now. Must read next chapter. Please update? Please.

Reviewer: The-heir-of-Gryffindor
Date: 01/14/10 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

Come on Kirsty!!!!!
UPPPPDATTTTTEEEEEEEE...
DYING HERE!
;)
AA.
xxxx

Reviewer: SilverLily
Date: 12/31/09 12:58
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Love Will Keep You Up All Night

You know, if I was there during this particular episode, I would have strangled Sirius even if I love him. Grrr. Why? Stupid Debbie.

Reviewer: SilverLily
Date: 12/31/09 8:02
Chapter: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

Squeeeeeee. Lily and James :D So sweet! Love it!

Reviewer: Jolia Potter907
Date: 12/26/09 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

if u dont write more i believe i schall go crazy!

Reviewer: bananaz13
Date: 12/10/09 14:16
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

Please update! i feel so lonely without kirsty!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( look youve made me cry! are you happy now?! :'(

Reviewer: Electro_Ponce
Date: 12/10/09 7:32
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

I am completely in love with this story!
It has to be the best Sirius/other pairing fiction I've read, but they way you've also included other pairings has also worked so well! I read another simliarish story, and their pairings of Remus/James with the friends of the major character was so old! It just didn't have any ingenuity involved at all. I will generally be upset when this story finishes!

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