Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 03/12/09 7:13
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Love Will Keep You Up All Night

oooh ur really good at this... i really love it... could u try to update fast??? I really cant wait to read more....

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 20 is in the queue ;)

Reviewer: saywhat_marauder
Date: 03/04/09 16:17
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

ur a really good author and r good at writing romancticy stuff....

Author's Response: Aww thank you! That means a lot to me :D

Reviewer: saywhat_marauder
Date: 02/23/09 23:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

plz get remus and hayley back together they were such a sweet couple and my fave characters

Author's Response: Awww, I'm sorry! As for them getting back together *rest of sentence is drowned out by a sudden and conspicuous loud noise* :p

Reviewer: Mack Attack
Date: 02/23/09 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

That was awesome and I can understand why you broke them up.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think you're the only person so far who doesn't hate me breaking them up lol.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 02/20/09 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Patroni

i always thought james' patronus was a stag- but i was probably wrong...
poor sirius :(
cool chapter!

Author's Response: His Animagus form is a stag, but JK never specified what his Patronus was, so I took some creative licence :D. Thanks!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 02/19/09 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

why couldnt sirius just sleep in lilys bed?

Author's Response: Because he wanted to sleep in Kirsty's ;) :p

Reviewer: The-heir-of-Gryffindor
Date: 02/18/09 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

It was such a long chapter *grins giddily*
I hate Debbie, why can't sirius be a man and just kiss kirsty!
Stupid boys.....
I'll have to check these drabbles out
:D

Author's Response: Yeah, stupid boys and stupid Debbie lol. Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: bkchic00177
Date: 02/17/09 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

This is a really good story but, i wish you'd make kirsty and sirius fall in love already!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, technically they are already in love with each, they're just not a couple :p.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 02/17/09 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

wow that was a very intence chapter. Part of me can't belive remus wouldn't tell her but he bign remus it makes sence. Poor hayly i feel so bad for her. Kristy is just being stupid she is so afraid to get hurt seh doesn't realsie the obviouse advances that sirius does. ANd debbie should jsut die. Taking the double chocolate muffin please. Anyway please up date as soon as you can this story is amazing.

Author's Response: I know poor Hayley and Remus :'(. Yes, Kirsty is very stupid, but we already knew that, right? HAHAHA! I love how th e taking of a double chocolate muffin can cause so much hatred for a character. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: dee-hearts-sirius
Date: 02/16/09 20:28
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! You are so cruel. Loved the chapter up until the point where you broke my heart. Please fix this!!!!!

Author's Response: Mwahahahahaha! Lol, I'm sorry I will attempt to mend your poor heart. *skulks off to continue being evil*

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 02/16/09 19:01
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Genius Meet Lunacy

is hogwarts in scotland?

uhhh, i really like Kristy!!!

Author's Response: Yes it is :). And thanks, I'm glad you like her.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 02/16/09 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

poor remus, i hope you get them back togeather, and sirus and kirsty better start dating or i'm gonna flip they're too perfect. keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: I know :'(. Hehe maybe you should flip :p. Thanks, I will try my best :D.

Reviewer: TimeturnerBabe
Date: 02/16/09 13:11
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Eclipse of the Heart

OMG this was so sad but a realyl good story though. Debbie is such a BETCH!! I cannot stand her...oh this is really sad...I was crying toward the end

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah *grrs at Debbie*. Aww, sorry to hear that I made you cry (although I'm actually rather please lol :p).

Reviewer: Mack Attack
Date: 02/11/09 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

I just found and started this story yesterday and it is the best fanfiction I have ever read!!! Thank you for taking your time to write it. Can't wait for the next up date!!!!

Author's Response: You read it all in a day?!? WOW :o! *applauds* That's quite some feat lol. Thank you so much! Thank you for taking the time to read it :D.

Reviewer: WeasleyTwinFanx3
Date: 02/10/09 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

when are you going to update?? this story is sooo amazing, i'm dying to read more!!!!

Chelsea

Author's Response: Don't worry, it's on its way :D

Reviewer: luinrina
Date: 02/01/09 6:09
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

After not having found the time to keep up with your story, I’m happy that I’m doing it now. Your story is really wonderful, and I like the fact that it captures me so easily, that it reads so smoothly, and that I have the impression of being there with the Marauders and the girls. It’s extraordinary and well done.

And although a group of four girls that are friends and become the girlfriends of the Marauders is a cliché in fanfiction, it doesn’t feel like that in your story. The way you write makes it feel original, and I truly enjoy reading it.

Where I can especially feel with the characters is that Sirius and Kirsty like each other but don’t admit it because they feel it would destroy their friendship. It makes me feel sad to know they’re not a couple, but the idea of bringing them together with the help of their friends and not get this friendship destroyed is really nice to read about. So it should come as no surprise that I loved chapter sixteen, Proof! beyond words.

Another point I love your writing for is the way you weave humorous situations into the story. I cannot write like this to save my life, but you certainly have a grasp for it, and I envy you your talent. For the majority of chapter sixteen, I could only chuckle. It was a really entertaining and well-written dialogue; it felt real and not at all forced or otherwise out of place.

Proceeding into chapter seventeen was a journey of laughing, aww-ing and feeling sorry for my favourite couple. I found the idea of Kirsty boycotting Valentine’s Day really funny, more so that she tried to get out of the common room as quickly as possible. But when that plan backfired, she tried getting Peter as her partner in crime. Funny though, Peter himself seemed to have found a girl he was interested in.

“Because I was hoping to try and spend more time with Heather,” he retorted irritably.
“Who the hell is Heather?” asked Kirsty, furrowing her brow and wrinkling her nose in puzzlement.
“The girl I’ve been playing chess with every evening over the past few weeks!” he exclaimed in exasperation.
“Oh yeah,” she said, the pieces all sliding in to place. “Does this mean that you no longer want to be a singleton?”
“Erm, no!” replied Peter, his voice dripping with sarcasm.

I really like that you give Peter the chance to get out of the picture of him being only a side-kick, the Marauder without colour. You make him a teenage boy with interests and strengths, weaknesses and fears – a well-rounded character. He’s human, not only the shy shadow for James, Sirius and Remus as he is written in so many other stories. I especially liked the phrasing his voice dripping with sarcasm because it suggests that he is not in the least intimidated by the more popular people but can stand his ground and be someone I could be interested in.

The description of the Great Hall decorated for Valentine’s Day was interesting and nicely done. I truly felt with Kirsty, and even Sirius. Also, I found the way you distracted the reader from the pinkness with the owl delivering Kirsty’s card as well as the trick Kirsty and Emma played on the presents really nice. You provided small details hidden in the plot, and it added to the charm but didn’t overdo it, at all.

The little rivalry of McIntosh and Sirius was entertaining, and I chuckled when Sirius went huffing and puffing over his book. It got really sweet with Kirsty writing him his forty-third card and the little kiss that followed. I actually squealed delightedly. I was sad with the encounter at lunch and would have liked to be in Emma’s place and shouting out to them that what each felt for the other was love, that they should stop acting like children and go on a date to Hogsmeade.

So my conclusion: Thank you for sharing this story with us, and I can’t wait to read the rest.

~Bine

Author's Response: Bine, I cannot express how much I love you right at this moment! lol. I am just speechless. This is so wonderful. I really cannot think of anything to say in response but thank you a million times over, if not more! It means even more to me (if that's possible) when I take into consideration that you're a mod. Really, thank you, from the bottom of my heart. This story would be nothing without reviewers like you, as it is you that makes me want to continue this story and make it the best it can possibly be.
THANK YOU!

~Whit (who is touched beyond words)

Reviewer: ginny_potter14
Date: 01/25/09 4:58
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

man are ur fics great i loved this chap i just thought it would be a lili bit more longer

Author's Response: Thank you! Lol, I can't always write extraordinary long fics you know :p.

Reviewer: timidcat
Date: 01/23/09 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

The boys are just plain stupid sometimes... poor Kirsty...

Author's Response: They are indeed *glares* stupid boys.

Reviewer: WeasleyTwinFanx3
Date: 01/20/09 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

Haha, also quite amazing. This is one of my favorite stories!!! I do think Sam was doing that on purpose though, very sneaky!!!! Kirsty sure knows how to write a great Valentine's Day card!!! God, why can't Sirius just ask her out already??? They are obviously meant to be together. Didn't he see her reaction to Debbie? I mean, come on, someones more than a little bit jell-o!!!

Chelsea

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, Sam can be very sneaky when he wants to be. Bless our little Kirsty. Lol, I don't think it's necessary a case of love being blind but rather love being blind to jealousy. Thanks for the review :D!

Reviewer: WeasleyTwinFanx3
Date: 01/20/09 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Aftermath: Part Two

Haha, loved it! I loved how James showed how much friendship and loyalty was worth to him, probably worth more than anything else. It makes it that much worse when Peter betrays him. But for now, he seems pretty kind, going after Emma and all that. I can't wait to see where it goes!!!

Chelsea

Author's Response: Yeah, bless little Jamesie! I know, I'm kind of dreading turning Peter into a baddie now, I rather like him in my story :(. Oh well, I have a while to go yet! Thanks for the review :D!

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