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Name: silverxstarx (Signed) · Date: 08/02/12 20:47 · For: Chapter 15 - Words (and not nice ones!)
I'm pretty late, I know, but you made Sirius very out of character. He'd never hit Remus because of a girl -- it's like an unspoken marauder rule. And a few chapters back, you stated that Emmas scar wasn't relative to Harry's, because you didnt want the story to be cliche. The fact that there are four girls that hook up with the marauders, and are all best friends, is the most cliche thing that could be in a marauders era fanfic.
Oh, and before, when Sam drunk-kissed Sian, I hate how you made everyone overreact. People do stupid things when they're drunk. You made Sam look like a total wuss, when he confronted Sian like that.
The plot is nice, I like it. I'm interested to see where this goes.

Name: CharCharBinks (Signed) · Date: 04/11/12 0:09 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
I LOVE IT! Literally spent god knows how long reading this instead of doing much needed A Level revision...But anyway! I wanted to say thank you, for having one of, if not the best Sirius/OC ff I've read. Please keep writing!!

P.S. I hope Debbie and Regulus get what's coming to them ;)

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 03/17/12 20:08 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
why????? please update again.i realy want to read more

Name: nerdy_birdy (Signed) · Date: 03/03/12 15:53 · For: Chapter 1 - The Gathering
Ahhhh! I need an update!!

Name: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised (Signed) · Date: 10/07/11 9:30 · For: Chapter 7 - Aftermath: Part Two
No, I don't think Sam redeemed himself. Sam will, in my opinion, remain an arrogant (please use your imagination for a suitable nasty name here) until they share their first kiss and he asks her out. I'm really sorry if that sounds as cheesy as my mom's homemade pizza, but that's the only thing I could think of that could possibly make up for such a display of dishonesty and betrayal. I do wish that Emma had been the one on the dance floor, that she could've been swept away in the arms of Sam, instead of the meddling Sian.

Name: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 9:14 · For: Chapter 2 - Genius Meet Lunacy
Using Latin like that is genius! You are doing a really great job of imitating the style of writing that J.K. uses, I feel as if the characters come to life throughout the story. Just one tiny bit of constructive criticism; I found it hard to follow the story when you talked through the positions everybody was in on the train, I got lost half way through and decided to skim, imagining all of them entwined in awkward positions as much as I could (I don't have the best of imaginations, that's why I enjoy reading so much, others write it for me! I hope I don't come across as lazy though, I'll have you know that this is the longest bracketed message I have written in my entire life!).

Name: alishahpfan17 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/11 18:52 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

Name: bananaz13 (Signed) · Date: 06/23/11 12:53 · For: Chapter 1 - The Gathering
This is an amazing story, like somebody else said, I feel like I know all the characters like they're my own best friends. I wish I could be within the story also. Please submit again soon!:)

Name: Nova (Signed) · Date: 05/14/11 8:53 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
Wow. It's been a while since I've read this story, but needless to say, it's definitely one of my favourites and has been for a while.

I really love he way you write the characters, and the subtle climaxes in the story that keep me wanting more. And considering the last update was a while ago, I'm still hanging out for a new chapter or two.

I don't know how you do it, but you make me miss the characters. You make me jealous of the friendship that they have together, and I wish that I was a part of that. I feel like I know them so well, and when they're not around, there's something missing. There's some damn fine writing going on if you can make that happen.

I hope school is going well for you, and that you'll return to these guys someday.

Name: AussiePotter (Signed) · Date: 05/02/11 4:30 · For: Chapter 20 - The Curious Incident of Two Wet Gryffindors in a Dormitory: Part Two
i love this story so much!! please update soon!!

Name: theroadtripper (Signed) · Date: 05/01/11 15:26 · For: Chapter 13 - Yuletide
Is that a Friends Quote I see??? I think it is but i won't judge. This is an amazing story and all the characters are so real and easy to relate to. Please hurry up and finish, please....

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 03/25/11 13:28 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
Regulus is such a little twit. i am sure that this is going to evoke the great black fight of the decade between both black brothers, and hopefully it will insire sirius to finally own up to his feelings. Kristy is incredibly brave and i am very glad she is ok. once again an amazing chapter. don't let life get you down and please update soon

Name: padfoot2116 (Signed) · Date: 01/30/11 17:51 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
its been over a year, can you please please please update?

Name: rachelnotrach (Signed) · Date: 12/06/10 18:57 · For: Chapter 1 - The Gathering
My friend told me I had to read this story and she was right! This is now one of my favorite Marauder era fictions. Keep it up, and please update soon (though I'm sure University keeps you very busy)

Name: Sirius_Seeker (Signed) · Date: 12/01/10 15:05 · For: Chapter 1 - The Gathering
I love your story soooo much and I've read what you've already written at least 3 times so can you PLEASE add another chapter!? You haven't updated in almost 11 months and I really want to know what happens next in the story.

Name: karamarie (Signed) · Date: 11/19/10 2:07 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
i know this has been said many times over already, but despite the long pause in updates it would give your loyal readers great pleasure to see a new chapter up! pretty please? you can't leave us without some love hehe. i avidly await to see a new update!

Name: hermione_lily_ginny_luna (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 2:18 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
Can you please update soon? I love your story, and would like to read more!

Name: red_lily (Signed) · Date: 09/29/10 16:43 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
I love your story, but I don't like the most recent story line. Also, please update soon!!

Name: weasleygirl2 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/10 21:20 · For: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike
awww please keep writing!!!

Name: weasleygirl2 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/10 9:18 · For: Chapter 5 - The Pickup Line
i had a question: i was wondering why you made everything canon except for the fact that james plays seeker (and i think sirius was on the team...) just wondering why you changed that

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