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Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 16:30 · For: Chapter 1
Aww that was so nice! Its completely different to all other lily/james stories i've read! I really lved it, like all your other work! I still love how james talked to her stomach, it will never grow old!
I think one of my fav bis has to be 'He turned to her with alarm, sporting a pink apron and holding a wooden spoon with half-cooked pasta dripping off it.' thats a very funny mental image to have!
Brilliant, very original!

Author's Response: Yes, James in a pink apron is certainly a Kodak moment! Thanks for the review!

Name: Chaser921 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 18:18 · For: Chapter 1
A good story, and I like that you used Lily and James for it. Your characterization of Bridget is good, and I like that Lily doesn't realize she's a goddess until she reads it. Nice touch there.
Only problem: you have a few spelling errors you might want to fix. Regulus instead of Regulas, and "nine times out of ten nights" instead of "nine times out of the nights." But those are probably typos. Other than that, your writing's good. I looke forward to reading more of it.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the typos, that always helps. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review.

Name: unregisteredanimagus (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 8:55 · For: Chapter 1
New story!!! Yay, yay, yay!!!! How do you manage them all?? Great storyline, spooky and mysterious... I really loved it, especially the way lilly acts, her anxieties are very canon to her youth and the chaos her world is at... Nasty times to raise a child, but no, you showed us very cleverly WHY a sensible and logical woman like lilly decides to bring a child into a world like this,,. You put it wonderfully : “I’m giving you a reason to fight, Lily. Someday you’re going to have a son, and you're going to fight for him. You’re going to be a wonderful mother. There’s your reason. Fight Voldemort for your son, Lily. Don’t give up on your life for your son.” ....

Once again congratulations.. You keep amazing me!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it realistic and within character for Lily, that's always the most important part to me in fics. Thanks for the wonderful review!

Name: HJPCATI (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 11:12 · For: Chapter 1
I loved it! I love everything you write, actually!

Author's Response: I'm glad, thanks for the review.

Name: HJPCATI (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 11:08 · For: Chapter 1
I loved it! I love everything you write, actually!

Name: J_Black (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 6:45 · For: Chapter 1
Nice new story Meg....

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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