Very interesting story :-) I liked imagining what Severus' private life could have been
I really like this idea. I think it would have been interesting if a student had interrupted at some point.
Finally, someone else who sees that Severus must have loved Dumbledore like a father! Great story! Thanks for sharing it.
"Presuade." Heh. It sounded way too good on AIM to let you run off without writing it! And here it is. I love it. You've taken a very hidden character from the books and made a person of her, and then paired her up with quite a good Severus.