Reviewer: hphermionefan
Date: 05/14/07 0:20
Chapter: Wedding Bells

I thought your story was captivating and well written. Towards the end, you seem to get a bit lazy and the story isn't as tight as it was at the beginning. I fully expected Hermione to be pregnant when she came back from the past and you didn't do that which is your perogitive, but it would have been a way for her to tell everyone about her trip to the past before Sirius resurfaces. Though Sirius would have been sad about missing part of his child's life, it would have been dramatic and added a little something to flesh out the last few chapters. Overall, an excellent story that I would recommend.

Author's Response: I get so tired of Hermione-gets-pregnant stories, though! I mean, come on.... she's a genius! She knows how birth control works!

Reviewer: h8Snape
Date: 05/13/07 23:26
Chapter: Wedding Bells

PS: i am rereading my way through the series right now (on book 5) And i keep wondering why Sirius isn't with Hermione : (

Reviewer: HarryCantSaveUs
Date: 05/13/07 20:56
Chapter: Wedding Bells

cute ending...bravo!

Reviewer: AivMoon
Date: 05/13/07 18:59
Chapter: Wedding Bells

I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!!!! OOOOOOH, PLZ WRITE A SECQUEL WITH HERMIONE A SIRIS GWTTN MARRIED THEN WIT KIDS!

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 05/13/07 18:55
Chapter: Wedding Bells

oh yay!!!! i'm grinning madly right now, clapping my hands and giggling to myself as my family watces on in confusion. this was an excellent story! i love the characterization, and it was a nice plot and just...perfect!!! thank you so much for writing this excellent story!

Reviewer: xKittiexCatx
Date: 05/13/07 17:47
Chapter: Wedding Bells

One of the best stories out there, in my opinion. Good plot, and terribly convincing. Leaves you wanting more.

Reviewer: votehermione
Date: 05/13/07 16:14
Chapter: Wedding Bells

yay!

Reviewer: Colli
Date: 05/13/07 13:25
Chapter: Wedding Bells

awww lovely ending!!!!!

Reviewer: Orangesnitch
Date: 05/13/07 6:36
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Awesome story! I really like it!

Reviewer: black_wings
Date: 05/12/07 22:37
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Please tell me it isn't over *cries*
Oh well
It was extremely great! God job!

Reviewer: siriusly_blackxx
Date: 05/12/07 22:24
Chapter: Wedding Bells

aww sooo sweet! great ending, but i'm so sad that its over!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/12/07 13:22
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Aww great end!
I enjoyed reading this fan fic all the way through!
I can't wait to read more of your work!

Reviewer: Tonks_
Date: 05/12/07 10:03
Chapter: Wedding Bells

NOOO! I dont want it to be over! it was sooo good!

Reviewer: Luciefer
Date: 05/12/07 5:13
Chapter: An Unusual Visitor

noes its over :( i really loved your story, its one of the better ones i've read here. gief sequel :>

Reviewer: superstitious
Date: 05/12/07 4:17
Chapter: Wedding Bells

oh, so cute!

Reviewer: Pearl14
Date: 05/12/07 2:14
Chapter: Wedding Bells

Loved the story! It was great!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/12/07 0:32
Chapter: Wedding Bells

awww....sequel! sequel!

Reviewer: gymnasticsluver1
Date: 05/12/07 0:31
Chapter: Wedding Bells

really the end???? FOREVER???? no more chapters in the story? i am gonna cry.. reconsider please!!!!!

Reviewer: Dark_chica
Date: 05/11/07 23:44
Chapter: Wedding Bells

I only have one word to discribe this story... Amazing!!!

Reviewer: lilyandjames4eva93
Date: 05/11/07 22:03
Chapter: Wedding Bells

i cant believe its all over :( this was one of the only stories that i checked on twice everyday to see if it was updated!! i would really like it if there was a sequel or epilougue (WINK WINK) im glad you wrote this story cuz its different to all the other boring ones that have no plot line. PLZ WRITE A SEQUEL!!!

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