If I were Hermione I'd be so tempted to cozy up to all of the future Order members and tell them to get far away from Peter. I suppose no one would believe me if I told them that anyway. Great chapter.
It's often hard to find some time alone. I know that when I finally am settling in for a restful afternoon, someone always comes along to disrupt things. I'm surprised Sirius wasn't more suspicious about a strange girl appearing in front of him. Great chapter.
Wow. Somehow, somehow, you created a heartbreaking, beautiful story out of a pairing that (in my opinion anyway) were impossible. You've written this in such a way that makes me wish it was what happened, because they are so perfect together. I've never been a fan of anything AU/non-canon, but I'm retracting that after reading this! I cried when Hermione came back, and I love how you managed to bring them together again, it was really quite remarkable. Amazing!!
I was sincerely disappointed when this story came to an end. Brilliant plot.
its heart tugging. I im still sobing. Loyalty and love...
I read this story about three times and never tired of it. That's rare. It was new every time.
such a fantastic story!
Read this in one sitting, and loved it :D
This was an amazing story. I came looking for a Sirius/Hermione love story , and i got it. I love the fact that it all fits together without breaking hardly any details of the actual books. Its like it could have really happened!!! thank you
Such a good Sirius/Hermione story, I loved every minute!! You have made me fall in love with the pairing even more wooooo thankyou :D
i have read up to this point and have been unable to tear my eyes away. congrats on a fucking amazing story, i love sirius hes my fave character and this story is just fanfuckingtastic. cant wait to read the rest!!!
Aaawweeeeee!!!!!!! My favorite fic eeeever!!! I was always meh on Hermione/Sirius, but I think I love them now!!
You see I was loving it yet depressed because I knew Sirius was dead and their couldn't possibly be a happy ending BUT you made a happy ending! I don't care how implausible it was, it was happy, and I loooove it!
I absolutely LOVE this fic! I didn't think I would, but it's absolutely brilliant. Funny, serious (or should I say, Sirius -lame-), cute, romantic all at the same time!
Cheers to an awesome fic. I'll be reading this one again. :D
awwww great ending
"...but inside he was feeling stangely... fluttery."
i laughed out loud = )
the last sentence is totally poetic. great job!
Wonderful. Simply spectacular. To die for.
This is the second time I'v read this fic and I absolutly love it! I'v also read the sequal,"polly" and loved that too! It's just something about your fic that makes me never want to stop reading it! It's definitly going on my ultimate favorites list!
“I believe that place is haunted,” she said, looking up at him with feigned ignorance.
“Yes,” he replied. “Haunted by a very naughty dog.”
I love that line! Keep up the good, no great work!