I did not get this story at all because wouldnt somebody notice that Harry was missing RON,HERMIONE maybe and they would tell Ginny wouldnt they and whats with the Green Dragon and doesnt she meet Harry again Im CONFUSED
uh, good story!! a bit interesting and confusing, but good all the same!
Author's Response: Alright...thanks!
um.... good chapter?
Author's Response: Okay.....thanks!
interesting first chapter. im not sure how i feel about the story yet, but it is creative!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Ohhh, this was a great start to your story. Although, I think that the begining was abit rushed. I think that Ginn's emotions are to heavy in the begining. I think that maybe it would be better if there were a bit more build up. Also, I think that the Green Dragon was introduced to quickly. I really like the ending of the chapter, though, It ended gradually and makes you want ot read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thrive on critique, so thank you for that too. I'm glad you liked the ending!
Yes I like it too. I actually read the whole thing, but I'm too lazy to leave a review on the last chapter, so...
This is really good. One thing though, 'Where were you last Might'. Yes. But other than that, I like it.
Okay, I reviewed your story. Now, you know what I want!!
Author's Response: Ah, another good catch. Now I need to stop being lazy, and actually edit. :P I do what you want, it should come sometime soom.
Nice start here. I like your characterization so far of Blekinsop (love that name :P). One nit-pick though:
"If he had really loved me, he would of taken the risk."
This should be would've, or would have, not would of. Other than that, good beginning, interested to see where you take it! :)
Author's Response: Whoops. Thanks for the catch! I really like Blenkinsop too!