great story its really interestin nd i luved the harry/draco thing hehe.
Loving this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.
You know, completely ignore the reviewer below. He's posted the exact same thing on several humor fics, so I don't think it's personal. *Rolls eyes. I'd send a message to Seren. In fact I could go ahead and report it for you if you wanted. I think your writing is excellent, with great attention to detail. I like the unusual pairing. Pansy and Nott are usually obscure for me. the most I know about them are brief mentionings of them But you've taken them and turned them into characters I desire to learn about. It's interesting that you hint at Pansy/Draco at the end, but we never actually see his name. You might keep that part secret and keep us guessing... ;) I thought this was great and I will be reading on!
Author's Response: Thanks for your sweet review :) I'm always most interested in what people have to say about this one because as you know, humour is my prefered genre to write. I get my Pansy/Theo characters from the RPG HarryGoesDown, so it's easier to build on them than you'd think. P.S. You *might* see a little more of the Pansy/Draco... *whistles*
Great Beginning! Its seems like a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Well, you deserve a great review for that...other one you got. I myself happen to be quite impressed with the story. Ok...one point off for creepy pairings :p. Sorry. D/H kind of scares me. But can't complain with a 9 and a spot on my favorites list, eh? It was very well-written, and hints at interesting and convoluted plot turns ahead. Can't wait to see what happens next! *Btw: might want to add a couple of warnings, like DAA and SSP (Drug-Alcohol Abuse and Same-Sex Pairing). Just to be safe. Please continue!*
Good for you and your stupid story, it aint like i like it or nothin but you really should take writing lesson i hated it and it smells like fish so go through the side door or go home and make hot coco for yourself and Ill buy you some Disney princess crazy crayons and a notebook in your desk and you can draw a picture maybe your good at art cuz u aint no good at writin yu lazy bum go watch a movie and leave us all alone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your well-written constructive critisism. Or perhaps *this* is the language you are better-adapted to: "Tank u 4 ur wel-rittin constuictiv critizizm". I would also love to introduce you to punctuation some day, but I'm thinking that your terrible grammar skills and abismal creativity have scared it away forever. Have a nice day.
