wow... seriously. absolutely loved it...
so poignant, so deep!
amazing (Y)
FANTASTIC! I love the banter between the Marauders, and how you get right inside of Sirius' grief.. Excellent and its going on my favorites!
Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
HungarianWitch
Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
HungarianWitch
I enjoyed your story very much. I liked haw Peter was allowed to be one of the gang, fot the most part, except maybe in the begininng when he asks Jocelyn:
" “Shall I help him, then?” he questioned disinterestedly, as though he were merely commenting on the weather.
“He’ll make sure you regret it if you don’t,” she replied."
I also liked the Maurader Map explanation, and how James just assumed it was another copy of Hogwarts: A History. It's funny how all the studious students think that's a necessity, and none of the others do!
I thought the end was poignent when you wrote "An earsplitting, heart-tearing howl rips through the hollow silence of Azkaban. Every prisoner shivers in their cell as their despair is vocalized."
That sadi it all very concisely!
I enjoyed your story very much. I liked haw Peter was allowed to be one of the gang, fot the most part, except maybe in the begininng when he asks Jocelyn:
" “Shall I help him, then?” he questioned disinterestedly, as though he were merely commenting on the weather.
“He’ll make sure you regret it if you don’t,” she replied."
I also liked the Maurader Map explanation, and how James just assumed it was another copy of Hogwarts: A History. It's funny how all the studious students think that's a necessity, and none of the others do!
I thought the end was poignent when you wrote "An earsplitting, heart-tearing howl rips through the hollow silence of Azkaban. Every prisoner shivers in their cell as their despair is vocalized."
That sadi it all very concisely!
that was so sad... but i still really liked it
that was so sad... but i still really liked it
How are Sirius and Jocelyn related?
~*PLEASE PLEASE answerI Really want to know*~
Author's Response: Jocelyn is the daughter of Sirius's Unlce Alphard. For more about Jocelyn, read my story Canis Majoris or any of its accompanying one-shots.
Bravo! Great job. Really enjoyed reading this. Definitly adding it to my favorites...
Sooo sweet. It was good but some sentances were too....wordy.
OMG- amazing story. i feel so bad for Sirius now- they were all so happy, and now he's alone, again, and there's no escape. soo sad. you have lots of talent; keep it up. sadly, now im going to be sad for sirius for the rest of the day....
Wow. Lots of emotion, great one-shot. Sequel?
Author's Response: Actually, there are three sequels. Click on my profile if you want to see them! Thanks for the review!
Wow! I really loved this. I liked how you introduced the Marauder's Map. I absolutely adored the little digs at James concerning Lily, they really made me laugh. Very good story!
Wow. That was awesome. I love how it was emotional on all ends of the spectrum. If that makes sense... Lol. Anyways, very good. And sad. But in a good way..? Ok, I should stop before I confuse myself more. =]
*crying* That was sad...but the memory of that Christmas was really sweet...it made me laugh at times. Really sad, though...great story.
This is gorgeous. I love the way it turned out. (Someday I'll be able to come up with a coherent, useful comment, I swear.)
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot coming from you, you know. (*laughs* Yeah, probably the same day I come up with one. Still, encouragement is *always* welcome!)
