I really liked this; it's an interesting take on Peter's feelings about his future, the marauders (sp?), etc.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review!
I like they way you've portrayed Peter in this. This is an interesting start; I look forward to seeing what happens to Peter next.
Author's Response: Chapter two is in the queue. Thank you for reading and leaving a review! :)
Wow! That was good. I really like it. The only thing that I wondered about was why the building seemed to be quite a bit away from it's sign.
Author's Response: Meh, I don't know why I did that. It added more mystery, I guess. ;D Thanks for reading!