Reviewer: Falconlord5
Date: 02/23/08 17:15
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Update please!!!

Reviewer: daylan dumbledore
Date: 02/13/08 13:51
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Loved it .. please hurry with the next chapter =)

Reviewer: tubawiz
Date: 01/30/08 23:57
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Awesome story, even for ignoring book 7, you have the rest of the cannon perfect, but shouldn't you let people know you are borrowing Charles Shults Peanuts characters of Charlie Brown and Linus? He might be dead but his family might sue for using his characters without permission.
Anyway, the plot is good and the way you build in the intensity is pretty good, is the Ravenclaw really potioning Emma or not? How does he tie in to the rest of the bad guys? Is he the son or grandson of a death eater like Meera? Also is their a meaning behind Meera or any of the other non cannon characters names ( besides what you already posted?)

Reviewer: tubawiz
Date: 01/30/08 23:54
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Awesome story, even for ignoring book 7, you have the rest of the cannon perfect, but shouldn't you let people know you are borrowing Charles Shults Peanuts characters of Charlie Brown and Linus? He might be dead but his family might sue for using his characters without permission.
Anyway, the plot is good and the way you build in the intensity is pretty good, is the Ravenclaw really potioning Emma or not? How does he tie in to the rest of the bad guys? Is he the son or grandson of a death eater like Meera? Also is their a meaning behind Meera or any of the other non cannon characters names ( besides what you already posted?)

Reviewer: Vivienne Black
Date: 01/28/08 20:13
Chapter: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

I like it so far. And am definitely reading another chapter :)

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 01/27/08 18:44
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Oh my god. That was definietely one of your best chapters. I really, really, did not expect that twist! I feel so sorry for Ed now. I'm so glad you updated, please have the next chapter soon!!

Reviewer: Iheartsiriusblack
Date: 01/26/08 20:22
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Finally!!!! I was in totall anticipation for this!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 22:57
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

Ooooo! Another cliffhanger! I can't believe that her aunt was a portkey. I hope Meera and her aunt can get out of this pickle.
It was a great chapter and I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 22:40
Chapter: The Yule Ball

Oh no! what's this all about??? I hope ..Nah, Voldemort's dead. But who could this be???
And they were having so much fun at the ball.
Great chapter though....

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 22:25
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Meera should be careful about that Malfoy kid...A great chapter, and it's really neat that Meera is having so much fun.
I hope everything goes well for her.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 22:10
Chapter: Reminiscence and Rememberance

Uh, I had no idea! *grins shyly* But that figures about a Malfoy being involved.
And ugh! What Voldemort did to Meera's mom. The filthy creep!
Great chapter.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 21:24
Chapter: Cauldrons and Broomsticks

Ooooo! A cliffhanger! I love it! Great chapter and a great quidditch match!
Hope Emma did'nt hex a bludger at Meera...
Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 21:11
Chapter: A Friend's Betrayal

Another fine chapter. It's a shame, Meera took the blame for the hex that Bill gave Emma's friend David. I guess her feelings took ahold of her and she just snapped.
She should be careful. As for what Snape will do for her, this should be very interesting.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 19:51
Chapter: A Chat and A Birthday

Awww, that is a nice ending! A cute chapter with Harry and Hermione fighting. I had no idwa that Harry was also head of Gryffindor House. Too cool!
Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 19:40
Chapter: High Flying Fun

Awww! Poor Meera! Those Finnigans are evil little prats! And Hooray for Sirius for sticking up for Meera.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 19:23
Chapter: A Sirius Proposal

Yeah, that would be fun to watch Quidditch matches! I think Quidditch would be alot of fun to participate in too.
It reminds me of ice hockey, the way they battle for the snitch....
And Harry is an awesome teacher! He'll be fun to watch in his classes.
I'm curious to see the relationship between Dobby and Meera, he might be a confidant to her like he was with Harry.
Just my thoughts. Great chapter though! Your story's alot of fun to read too! ;0)

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/24/08 19:08
Chapter: The Potions Master from Hell

It was a fantastic chapter! I just love this story and it's nice to see Riddle's daughter being a normal girl. She's terrific, unlike her totally rotten father. And her friends are awesome!
It's a great story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Snape is just being Snape, like he was with the Trio. He's just got a bug up his butt, that's all. ;0)

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/23/08 23:23
Chapter: "Enemy of His Blood"

my personal opinion is that you need to rewrite the second half of this chapter. it is really jerky and not like the rest of your writing.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/23/08 23:20
Chapter: A Sorting Hat and a Small Mishap

awesome chapter! I love that idea of Harry being the Defense against the Dark Arts teacher!! That is so cool! Not cool for James Potter though, *giggle*
Meera is definately different from her dad.
I admire her courage and pluckiness to withstand the taunts. She sounds like a wonderful person.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/23/08 23:05
Chapter: Reminiscence and Rememberance

I love that bit with pomfrey trying to kick mcgonagall out of the infirmary...

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