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Name: Poison1233 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/12 15:44 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
This story is super cool. Hurry up and write the nxt chapter!!!!!

Name: Poison1233 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/12 15:43 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
This story is super cool. Hurry up and write the nxt chapter!!!!!

Name: TessMalfoy (Signed) · Date: 06/26/10 22:53 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
I love this story!!! I really do hope you will continue it at some point, it's great stuff! You're a fabulous writer with a lot of voice :)

Name: Kopycat (Signed) · Date: 06/01/09 14:02 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
why on earth did he laugh?

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/30/08 0:08 · For: The Yule Ball
oooo plot twist !!!! i truly adore meera and james!!!!

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/23/08 0:27 · For: Hogsmeade
the plot thickens... dun dun dunnnnn

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 23:48 · For: Cauldrons and Broomsticks
oh no do bad things happen to meera? Whatever shall i do? but yay!!!!! good qudditch match! i love the way she had to struggle a bit to find it.

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 23:27 · For: A Friend's Betrayal
ooo interesting plot twist oooo yay snape!! i always loved snape!!! Yay alan rickman!! love ishi mama

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 13:12 · For: A Chat and A Birthday
yay fluff!!!!!

Name: angelsdark89 (Signed) · Date: 07/21/08 1:52 · For: A Sirius Proposal
lovely so far!!!! congratz!! i will continue r&r ing like a freak

Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 3:08 · For: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
Ok, let me start by saying that the idea behind this fic is very promising. I mean, Voldemort having a daughter with an Indian girl is definitely something we haven’t heard of before (at least I haven’t) so Kudos to you for originality. However, there were a few things that caught my eye that could do with a little improvement.

You are playing with the first person limited, present tense here but on accessions, you slip into past tense which disrupts the flow of the story. Also, Meera keeps slipping from first person limited to third person omnipresent.

I also realize that though you are trying to show the Hindu culture as well as putting the language in, I think you have overdone it slightly. The “beta” was fine but the “I love you” was translated quite roughly. I realize that there isn’t a real translation in Hindi which would sound as casual in Hindi as it does in English (yes, I speak Hindi fluently), something along the lines of “take care of yourself, Gudia” would have sufficed.

Always remember that though research and incorporation of it is important, never make the readers feel as if you are stuffing too much in their brain and pointing our very obvious things to them.

Overall, I think this story has great potential and I will hopefully come back to read more of it. :)=Sammy

Name: slytherin_princess_9 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 16:25 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
Great chapter! I am anxious to know what happens next. Of course, I understand about being too busy to update-I haven't updated in almost a year. =/

Name: GiantSeaStar (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 22:59 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
Wow. OMG. Update soon!....Oh, right, yeah. I love this story, I've been reading it since day one and haven't actually remembered/had time to review. This is extradordinary writing. Brilliant!

Name: kate_wilby (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 18:47 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
This is a great story! Am loving it. Hope there's another part coming soon!

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 05/08/08 21:19 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
EXCELLENT! Dobbie saves the day again. I'm loving this fic, it's an unusual idea Voldemort producing a daughter but it's nice to see that not everyone is prejudice. Harry sounds like a brilliant teacher, knows when to be stern and when to have a joke, I particularly enjoyed his and Hermione's little tiff over responsibility. I'm a little surprised at Harry keeping secrets from Meera (love that name, it's cool), I mean you'd think he'd be the opposite because of Dumbledore hiding the truth from him, but i guess he has his reasons. Anyway, can't wait for the next installment.

Name: teresaschultz06 (Signed) · Date: 04/28/08 20:16 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
Can't wait for the next chapter

Name: fren (Signed) · Date: 03/24/08 18:25 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
not only was this chapter awsome but your entire story. you have got to finish this story.you should become a writer.i like the twist of oedipus liking meera. IT! WAS! AWESOME! you are just as good as JKRowling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: lzweig (Signed) · Date: 03/21/08 9:40 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
please please put another chapter on!!! i wanna know what happens!! this is one of my favorite fan fictions!! great job.

Name: RebFenix86 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 0:32 · For: "Enemy of His Blood"
From what I have read of your story I have thoroughly enjoyed it. It takes a pleasant and dark twist on the Harry Potter universe, and I also look forward to the continuing adventures of Meera.

Name: lmcayton (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 10:40 · For: Reminiscence and Rememberance
yay! where is my cookie!? ;-)

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