This story is super cool. Hurry up and write the nxt chapter!!!!!

I love this story!!! I really do hope you will continue it at some point, it's great stuff! You're a fabulous writer with a lot of voice :)

oooo plot twist !!!! i truly adore meera and james!!!!

oh no do bad things happen to meera? Whatever shall i do? but yay!!!!! good qudditch match! i love the way she had to struggle a bit to find it.

yay fluff!!!!!

Ok, let me start by saying that the idea behind this fic is very promising. I mean, Voldemort having a daughter with an Indian girl is definitely something we haven’t heard of before (at least I haven’t) so Kudos to you for originality. However, there were a few things that caught my eye that could do with a little improvement.

You are playing with the first person limited, present tense here but on accessions, you slip into past tense which disrupts the flow of the story. Also, Meera keeps slipping from first person limited to third person omnipresent.

I also realize that though you are trying to show the Hindu culture as well as putting the language in, I think you have overdone it slightly. The “beta” was fine but the “I love you” was translated quite roughly. I realize that there isn’t a real translation in Hindi which would sound as casual in Hindi as it does in English (yes, I speak Hindi fluently), something along the lines of “take care of yourself, Gudia” would have sufficed.

Always remember that though research and incorporation of it is important, never make the readers feel as if you are stuffing too much in their brain and pointing our very obvious things to them.

Overall, I think this story has great potential and I will hopefully come back to read more of it. :)=Sammy

Wow. OMG. Update soon!....Oh, right, yeah. I love this story, I've been reading it since day one and haven't actually remembered/had time to review. This is extradordinary writing. Brilliant!

EXCELLENT! Dobbie saves the day again. I'm loving this fic, it's an unusual idea Voldemort producing a daughter but it's nice to see that not everyone is prejudice. Harry sounds like a brilliant teacher, knows when to be stern and when to have a joke, I particularly enjoyed his and Hermione's little tiff over responsibility. I'm a little surprised at Harry keeping secrets from Meera (love that name, it's cool), I mean you'd think he'd be the opposite because of Dumbledore hiding the truth from him, but i guess he has his reasons. Anyway, can't wait for the next installment.

not only was this chapter awsome but your entire story. you have got to finish this story.you should become a writer.i like the twist of oedipus liking meera. IT! WAS! AWESOME! you are just as good as JKRowling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

From what I have read of your story I have thoroughly enjoyed it. It takes a pleasant and dark twist on the Harry Potter universe, and I also look forward to the continuing adventures of Meera.