Oh that was sad=Sammy
Author's Response: sorry it was sad. thanks for reviewing!
This is okay.. i'm not a huge fan of unrhyming poetry but yours seems to work in most of the places.. and this wouldn't happen to be mallory is it? cuz if it is it's Kelcy!
Author's Response: sorry, it's not mallory! thanks for reviewing!
Ah! So sad and powerful! Wonderful job - it is amazing. I love it.
Wow. That last line is so moving. Wow.
~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make it sad; conveying her feelings at such a tumultuous time is difficult.
Very well done. Your rhyming style carries a lot of power.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear that.