Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/24/07 14:21
Chapter: For the Good of the World

No fear to die at all-no fear. I love that you pointed that out. I think that it really applys to the final battle and with Voldemort. This can really open one's eyes.
*huggles*
~MJ

Author's Response: Thank you! *huggles back* I actually think it's quite important for an Auror such as oine of the Prewett brothers to express that 'no fear' belief. It's what wins the war in the end, and their selflessness pays off.

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 03/23/07 17:52
Chapter: For the Good of the World

*gawks* That was an AMAZING poem! Hm...my favorite line would have to be:

We'll fight the last, we're not afraid

A very powerful sonnet (right?!) 10/10!~

Monty

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! That line there is a kind of spin-off from my fic "Silence and Motion" which basicall tells the same story. :)

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 01/29/07 11:05
Chapter: For the Good of the World

Suzie!

I like it tres tres much. It's a sonnet! Woohoo! My favourite image in this poem has to be 'the darkness grown on every land' because I can just see black darkness rising up from the earth, like spirits almost, and it's chilling.

Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Yay! It's a sonnet! :D (Well I *did* write it for class :p ) I'm glad you like it. This is one of my better rhyming poems I think. I usually over--cheese them... ~Suzie, *hugs* Thanks for reviewing!

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