Reviews For A Warning
Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 01/20/08 8:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved this! I like how Bellatrix regrets killing Sirius. I like to believe that there is more to her than just insanity and that she is a person with feelings just like everyone else, so I thought this was great!

Author's Response: I'm a huge Bella fan. *hugs Bella* She's the lead in many of my stories and always has a lot more to her character than the norm. Thanks for the review.rnrn

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/05/07 21:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Amazing. This was so...different form what I'm used to reading. I liked how she had the dream, but didn't think it was herself in it. In the third from the last paragraph you left off one of the quotation marks.

“We were supposed to,” Bellatrix persisted. “We were warned.

All in all a very good one-shot!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And thanks for pointing out the missing quotation mark.

Reviewer: pinktat
Date: 02/03/07 10:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Outstanding as always. I really enjoy reading about bella and narcissa now and you can be proud in the knowledge (or not lol) that it has been you that has changed my view as I would never have considered reading or thinking they had feelings like the other charecters. I had always seen them as hard faced but no more! Keep it up.

Author's Response: *smiles* Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoy my stories and it's always nice to hear that I have changed the way someone looks at the Black sisters.

Reviewer: VeniaTaint
Date: 01/29/07 7:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ohhh...eerie...I like!
~The Tainted One

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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