Reviews For Dirty Magic
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/28/08 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oooooh wow. I never pictured Sirius as this angsty, but it was great. Makes me even sadder than I am already for Sirius, but it was a great story all in all. Great job! {Becca}

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 11/20/07 2:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh, you really capture Sirius' personality here. How, at the end, he hides his greif in lies and laughter.

Reviewer: Tabletop_Joe
Date: 02/07/07 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Words cannot describe the awesome awesomeness of this story. I've had friends show up on my doorstep in just that manner. You did a great job of capturing the mind and mentality of a scared teenage boy in an intolerable situation. Write more you must, yes!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 02/03/07 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

i love how you don't know who it is at first. i love those types of stories. when you have to guess and then read to find out. it keeps people hooked.

Reviewer: lady_potter7447
Date: 02/03/07 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this.
Sirius' panic is really realistic, and I love the last line. I don't know why, i just do.

Reviewer: Darkness Enshrouds
Date: 01/31/07 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

*hums with pleasure*....Absolutely fantastic. Sirius' wow....I love the way your writing flows, the way you give enough information without giving TOO much. So yes. Absolutely fantastic.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 01/31/07 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. This was wicked. You showed his emotions differently than I've read them in other fics. You showed hate and at the same time you showed vulnerability without losing him. It was fabulous.

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