Reviews For Smoke and Mirrors
Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 12/13/07 19:31
Chapter: A Hero's Death

This is a promising start! Keep working on it!

Reviewer: LandL2
Date: 11/15/07 23:25
Chapter: A Hero's Death

am reading it on ff.net now =)

Reviewer: LandL2
Date: 11/15/07 22:50
Chapter: A Hero's Death

Hey! This is pretty good! I had tears threatening to spill...great writing, I hope you continue soon, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
alright, take care~!

Reviewer: WerewolvesSmellPooey
Date: 08/01/07 6:05
Chapter: A Hero's Death

Awww that was really sad and depressing :/
good start though :]
Update pleaaaase?
:)x

Author's Response: Thanks for your review - as I haven't been on Mugglenet Fanfiction in a while, I just saw it today. So there is good news and bad news. The bad news it that Mugglenet's fanfiction has some very strict policies about what you can and can't post, (as I'm sure you all know). I've tried to upload new chapters, only to see them rejected because I used 3 periods instead of four at the end of a sentence.... (<- just like that). So I gave up with this website. The good news is that this story has continued, on fanfiction.net. It has 10 chapters right now, so if you're still interested you can check it out there. I'm also thinking of trying to post the rest of the chapters here again, but that might take years to finally work... haha

Reviewer: RavenclawHermione
Date: 02/04/07 19:00
Chapter: A Hero's Death

Awww... that's sad that so many died, even though you only named Neville, and second year Hufflepuff, and Draco. Why isn't Narcissa getting her son's body?

Author's Response: Although we don't mention it in the chapter, Narcissa is dead, therefore, it would be quite difficult for her to get her son's body. Also, another reason there are so many unclaimed bodies, is that with all the turmoil, its been difficult for parents to get to Hogwarts. Thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Although we don't mention it in the chapter, Narcissa is dead, therefore, it would be quite difficult for her to get her son's body. Also, another reason there are so many unclaimed bodies, is that with all the turmoil, its been difficult for parents to get to Hogwarts. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 02/04/07 18:59
Chapter: A Hero's Death

Wow, I think that this was a very good beginning to a promising story. Very depressing, but good nonetheless. Congrats on a job well done, and I look forward to following your story as it progresses.

Reviewer: GinnyRox
Date: 02/04/07 18:47
Chapter: A Hero's Death

This has gotten off to a pretty good start. I like how the beginning was simple and not over dramatic, but I do wish that it was longer.

Also I don't think McGonagall would call Hermione by her first name. She would call her Miss Granger. I can't wait for your update!

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