ooooohhh! sirius is kind of sensitive! alot goes on behind remus lupin's quiet exterior, huh?
nice work, can't wait to click "next".
wanna know whats goin' on.
what happens with next chapter wich is censurated?
i like this. go on please
Update soon, this really has the potential to be something interesting. Your Marauders seem very real, like I expect them to be and not stereotype's people usually use in RL/SB fics.
Remus seems quiet yet mischievious and Sirius is arrogant but not annoyingly so. Other fics have a tendancy to over do one aspect of each guy's personality. You seem to do them justice.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
was this fight between james and sirius ever mentioned in the books or are u just making it up?
Wow! This is so good!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and hope you'll continue to read xxx