Reviewer: Faith Marie
Date: 11/20/07 18:37
Chapter: Chapter 4

ooooohhh! sirius is kind of sensitive! alot goes on behind remus lupin's quiet exterior, huh?

nice work, can't wait to click "next".

Reviewer: dro_maik Black
Date: 09/17/07 2:07
Chapter: Chapter 4

wanna know whats goin' on.
what happens with next chapter wich is censurated?

Reviewer: dro_maik Black
Date: 09/17/07 1:50
Chapter: Chapter 3

i like this. go on please

Reviewer: Obsessed_Much
Date: 08/28/07 15:09
Chapter: Chapter 3

Update soon, this really has the potential to be something interesting. Your Marauders seem very real, like I expect them to be and not stereotype's people usually use in RL/SB fics.

Remus seems quiet yet mischievious and Sirius is arrogant but not annoyingly so. Other fics have a tendancy to over do one aspect of each guy's personality. You seem to do them justice.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 08/28/07 14:16
Chapter: Chapter 3

Horrible

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 08/28/07 13:51
Chapter: Prologue

was this fight between james and sirius ever mentioned in the books or are u just making it up?

Reviewer: luckycharm
Date: 04/29/07 13:53
Chapter: Prologue

Wow! This is so good!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and hope you'll continue to read xxx

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