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Reviews For Master and Serpent

Name: Archaeopteryx (Signed) · Date: 01/28/07 16:23 · For: Chapter 1
I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: Lady Voldemort (Signed) · Date: 01/27/07 12:09 · For: Chapter 1
I liked the idea and the way you wrote it, although I definitely didn't like the rythme. I love light rythme generally, but there are lines I couldn't find any rythme there.
Maybe because I'm not an English native speaker? probably.
But still, it's very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The rhyme is on the second and fourth lines of each verse, while the first and third do not rhyme. Hope that helps. ;-)

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