I like it!!! I for one will be waiting for you to add on!! But first, you have to finish My Deliverance. I'll die if you don't!!!
i think you should make this into a longer fic. it started off really sweet and sometimes sappy love stories just make people feel good. nice job.
Aww, I loved it! Perfect place to end, in my opinion. Great job!
omg i love it you should make it into a full fledged fic but don't do any heart breaks ok cuz i hate it when that happens
aaaah I LOVE IT
i loved this.
one of my favorites.
i really love your fic! it just deeply bothers me that you used a Coldplay song.....because, you know, the time period......but other than that, it was really sweet!
'Just Because' and 'Quit Haunting Me, Will You?'
oh its so magical and romantic! i love it please do finish it
I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it and hope you turn it into a "full fledged fic"! Beautifully written. I like the idea of Lily's family's problems but I think it's a bit cliche for her to move across the street from James after they've know each other for so long. But I don't mind a cliche once in awhile. Keep going!
oh this was so cute!
OH, WAIT, JUST READ THE ENDING- DO CONTINUE!
Awww! That's honestly the best potrayal of James (most people understand his "maturing" to mean he's no fun or mischevious anymore) and Lily (again, most people write about her as a stuck up bit-anyway!...)
Keep writing, but maybe not on this story. It's awsome the way it is ^_^
very nice..one of the best L/J I've read..i dont think you should make it any longer though, its great the way it is!!
that was cute! I lilked that!
Very sweet, I really loved it.
Aww, that was adorable. I loved it!
Hmm...nice story. I do have to wonder how Lily and James ended up together after what Harry saw in the Pensieve...
I don't think you need to lengthen this story...it's nice how it is, and besides, we know what happens next: Lily and James marry and have a child...
I LOVE IT! ITS SO SWEET!
I like it enough!!DEFININTLY!!!!!