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Name: Luna_Lovegood11 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/08 20:04 · For: Chapter 2
I love your ending note. So... crazy? But anyways, nice poem, you're a good poet! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! *reads ending note* lol, you have to read the top as well to get it XD Then again, most people probably don't get it anyways! ~ H_o_I_

Name: Hermione Lurves Ron (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 21:36 · For: Chapter 2
Heh Heh Heh! I must agree with you about the Lucy/Tumnus thing on ur bio. Now THAT is sick and wrong!

Author's Response: I don't know if that's a real ship, but it's still sick and wrong, like u said...~ H_o_I_

Name: cutiepoet (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 19:31 · For: Chapter 2
WOW! This was way, way better than chapter 1. You really improved, just within one chapter. That's awesome, and you deserve applause for sure! Great work. The piece flowed better this time, and when I read it aloud, I really liked it. You did really well! Kudos to you! Congrats!

Author's Response: Danke!~ H_o_I_

Name: cutiepoet (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 19:28 · For: Chapter 1
I really can't tell who this poem is about. To be quite honest, I don't think this was the best you could do. I haven't read "They Told Me Not To," but I didn't like this chapter. Maybe the next one will improve, but I didn't think that the time and rhythm flowed well. But that's just one writer's opinion! Good effort was put forth, though. I could tell! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Sorry it wasn't all that clear >.< And it's not my best poetry-thing ever done, but it was from young Tom Riddles point of view. Once again, thanks for reviewing!!!!!~ H_o_I_

Name: JulieRose (Signed) · Date: 04/02/07 17:47 · For: Chapter 2
that was really good! even though it said one-shot you should keep on writing it is very good!!

Author's Response: I don't know if I'm going to add to this poem, but it might have a...partner fic (shhhh). Thanks for reviewing! Again!~ Monty

Name: JulieRose (Signed) · Date: 04/02/07 17:47 · For: Chapter 1
That has always been my theory too, that Voldemort/Tom Ridlle once loved some girl but she broke his heart and he never loved again. GREAT POEM!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I can picture only very few people in HP without love lives (Snape, for instance...?) But Tom just seems...I dunno. Thanks for reviewing!~ Monty

Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 14:41 · For: Chapter 2
Deep and powerful stuff here... I can't even begin to comprehend how it would feel to look back at someone you used to know and even love and see them transformed into an evil and inhuman monster. Although I liked the slight inclusion of humour:

"After I shattered his heart,
And sewed to new,
He did the same,
But forgot number two."

Author's Response: Thanks (again) for reviewing! *shudders* That would be kind of (very) horrid...*shudders again* And that would probably have to be my favorite little group in the whole poem...~H_o_I_

Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 14:39 · For: Chapter 1
Oh, wow, I really like it... this is so interesting. Maybe Dumbledore was wrong about Voldemort having NEVER loved... maybe he LOST the ability to love. (That is my theory, but then, I ship Voldy/Minerva.) This is very good. Some writers (*waves*) have trouble keeping a steady rhyme scheme, but this is very ballad-y.

I must point out that I read your author profile and 'squee'd a little. The Monty Python reference at the beginning was awesome-- and YOU'VE READ PERCY JACKSON AND THE OLYMPIANS! I love those books so much. My favourite character is Grover, because he's adorable and geeky and reminds me of a more sensitive Ron. And you ship Klaus/Isadora? I suppose that makes sense, seeing as Fiona turned her alliance to the dark side... but then, I've never really thought about shipping Klaus. I really like him, though.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! And I dunno, I just think of Tom Riddle being more sensitive than Voldemort...No idea why. You think it's ballad-y? =) I love Monty Python! *dances* Wow, someone else who's read Percy Jackson!!! *dances more* I do like Grover. Go Goat Boy! sorry...And Klaus is one of my favorite characters, so...=) Well, thanks for reviewing!~H_o_I_

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 02/20/07 20:32 · For: Chapter 2
What the heck. I could've sworn I reviewed the second chapter!

(Oh, by the way, did your parachute break? *looks to A/N*)

Wow. I wish I could rhyme like you do. Oh, well. I'll stick to free verse.

Anyways...wonderful job. I love Scotti's way of talking. Very straightforward and sweet in the beginning, sad-ish at the end. Wonderful job. (Darn. I keep repeating myself)

Well, I love it...

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Nope, my parachute didn't break...It never opened. Stupid insurance company. Anywhoo...I actually wish that I could write free verse, but every time I try, it ends up back at the beginning. *sigh* Wonderful job? yay! And I do tend to stick to sad poems...No idea why... Thanks for reviewing!~H_o_I_

Name: WhatsInAName (Signed) · Date: 02/04/07 22:10 · For: Chapter 2
Two things. First, this is awesome, as usual. You are far better than I am at writing poems. It's true! Second, some people are annoying. You know who I mean. Bwahahaha! No one else who reads this will know what I mean!! Except you, that is. But anyway, 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thanks! But no, you're an excellent poet! And some people are annoying. It took me a few seconds to understand who...gr. Did you get IT? *runs off to kill, I mean, talk to SOMEONE* Sorry if it's kind of confusing for people who are reading this...But thanks again, and I prefer to differ on Number One~H_o_I_

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 01/26/07 13:53 · For: Chapter 1
Okay, since the second chapter isn't validated yet...*glares angrily at nothing in particular* I'll just finish my review here.

Yes, I said I liked the rhyming, and the beat was great too. In some places I was laughing a bit, though maybe you didn't want that to happen....but just thinking of Voldy on his knees....*giggles* Oh, excuse me, Tom. :-)

Very nice, even though it didn't happen!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Again, thanks! I actually liked the part where he started begging Scotti (that's what I decided to call her) to go out. It's very non-Voldy, Voldypoo, The Riddler, and very innocent. Kind of. The second chapter should be the last, though, even if I already said that it was done, so I'll just stop typing, and say THANKS!~ H_o_I_

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 01/26/07 13:50 · For: Chapter 1
Wow - great rhyming. I love this! Even if it is OOC and AU. Very sweet.

Onto the second chapter, of course!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I just submitted the second chapter, don't know if it will get the okay...~H_o_I_

Name: WhatsInAName (Signed) · Date: 01/26/07 9:39 · For: Chapter 1
AWESOME!!! This is even better than 'TTMNT' (and that's They Told Me Not To, not Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles)! And it is strange how stories turn into themselves as you write... Oh, well...

Show-off time! You said on your profile you're not sure how to spell 'fiance'? It's fiance for a man, fiancee for a woman. I think. It could be the other way around. So I'm not showing off, just making a fool of myself.

ANYwho, loved it!


Author's Response: Thank you! This was another little poem that I did around midnight, funny how that happens...But thanks for reviewing (and telling me how to ((possibly)) spell fiance!~H_o_I_

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