Reviews For My Prison
Reviewer: calm_chaos
Date: 03/16/07 18:31
Chapter: My First Escape

If there was ever a poem this would be it! The analogies in your poem are what make it unique. Not to mention I am a total Sirius-Black-a-holic! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! And, yeah, I'm proud to say that I share you addiction to the magnificent Sirius Black!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 02/19/07 15:00
Chapter: My New Prison

its a really moving peice, and i had never before thought about him moving from prizon to prizon but that is all it really ever was. really good, all of the poems were.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! I always thought Sirius' life was just one depression after another...that may be why he's one of my favorite characters. Anwyay, thanks again! : )

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/31/07 20:04
Chapter: Azkaban

The guilt pounds
Upon my mind,
Filling every
Empty crevice.

Great imagery, there!

Even James had
Been angry then.
Even James…

Don't know why, but that line struck me.

Now, if only they had killed Pettigrew...*sigh*

Nice job. Great imagery, too.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : ) Yeah, I know it's a shame with the whole Pettigrew thing, but what can you do...

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/31/07 20:00
Chapter: Betrayal

*sniff* Oh my gosh, so sad! He would think it was his fault, wouldn't he? Amaizing! You instill a great emotion with the use of a few simple phrases. I love it!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/31/07 19:58
Chapter: My First Escape

Wow. Amazing, really - it sounded just like Sirius Black would sound if he wrote poetry. Very simple, yet it weaves intricate feelings among it - well done!

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you! : )

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